2015英语大专题之短文改错与书面表达{修改}.pptVIP

使用精彩句式，增强语句表现力 1.We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well. →_______we were to see crops and vegetables growing well! 2. Radio broadcasts didn’t begin until 1920. →It was__________________________________________. 3.He never speaks about his own family. →Never__________________________________________. 4.A notice is saying ”Please Save Water” on the wall. →On the wall______________________________________. 5.Though he is a child, he knows a lot. →___________________________________. How glad not until 1920 that radio broadcasts began does he speak about his own family is a notice saying ”Please Save Water” Child though/as he is, he knows a lot 影响给分的因素之三： 行文的流畅 上下贯通、一气呵成 正确而巧妙地使用好连接词 1.表递进 ２.表转折　 ３.表因果 ４.表目的 ５.表归纳 and,then,also,besides,morever,whats more furthermore,in addition,more than that... but,however,although,though,in spite of,despite ，after all,on the contrary,on the other hand... because,since,therefore,so,hence,thus,consequently ，as a result/consequence,on account of... in order that,so that,for the purpose of... in general,in brief,in short,in conclusion, in a word,on the whole... 句法涉及到一致, 从句多考引导词（误用，多用或遗漏 ） 【2014辽宁卷】 The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby. has 句子成分多分析 短文改错典型错词类型分析归纳 【2014年四川卷】 If you notice that when someone is missing or hurt, tell your teacher immediately. 【2012全国课标卷】 But before long they began to see which was happening. what 【2012 陕西卷】 What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. 【2013新课标 2卷】 Having tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 o’clock at night. was which 解决方案 （1）不同的句子成分要用不同的词类； （2）不同的语境要选择不同的词语。 （3）只有对句子结构和成分作细致的分析，才能找出用词不当的错误。 冠词在前 “错” “多” “少”。 常考的错误形式有：冠词the, a, an 的误用，多用或少用。 【2014辽宁卷】 Besides, Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day. 【2013四川卷】 The teacher got angry because we had same answers. an 冠词、连词常光顾 短文改错典型错词类型分析归纳 ∨ the