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我们一起研究高考系列之写作 英语高考第II卷(满分35分) 第一节 短文改错（10分） 第二节 书面表达（25分） Writing a composition is just like making a sandwich. Now in the country areas, there are many children out of school. The reasons can be listed as follow. ____________, most families are too poor to send their children to school. __________, they have no choice but to stay at home and make money. as a result; In addition ; To begin with ; However To begin with As a result 使用恰当的连接词 Use proper conjunctions Avoid Chinglish! 1) Though the transport is good ，but it fades next to our natural resources. 2) There has a highway connected with Beijing. 3) It will cost us much money to buy one.  is take 倒装句 强调句 主从复合句 分词状语 With 复合结构 Adopt a variety of sentence patterns 使用较丰富的句式 1. I had a good idea. A good idea occurred to / came to me. I came up with a good idea. 使用高等词汇 2.He didn’t get up until 7 o’clock. It was not until 7 o’clock that he got up. Not until 7 o’clock did he get up. 倒装句 强调句 3. The Chinese artists were to perform here that night. The news cheered everyone of us. The news that the Chinese artists were to perform here that night cheered every one of us. 合并为复合句 Rome is not built in one day. Practice makes perfect! Organization of a composition Brief introduction (Name of the person) The relationship between you and him/her Main body Personality characteristics His/Her activities or achievements Conclusion Your comments/feelings about the person When you organize this composition, please refer to the following rules. First give the brief introduction, including the name and the relationship. For example, Ms Shao is our English teacher. In the main body, when you describe the person’s character, don’t forget to give the examples. For example, Ms Shao is a good teacher. She always makes her class interesting and lively. I remember once … At last, write down your comments or feelings about the person. For example, Although sometimes Ms Shao