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强化写作概述 A brief introduction of who I am 张艳 京语言大学 University of Toledo (06-09) Applied Linguistics-TESL Academic interests: Writing and Listening 02-10 2. IELTS overview Listening 40 Reading 60 Writing 60 Speaking 15-20 3. Things I need to do to prepare for the IELTS test Vocabulary Cambridge IELTS 4. IELTS writing Time：20+40 Tasks：task 1+task 2 Content： Task 1: letters or graphs Task 2: argumentation, discussion or mixed Criteria Task accomplishment Grammatical range and accuracy Lexical resource Coherence and cohesion Task accomplishment完成任务情况 完整结构 不要跑题 例：juvenile delinquency Antisocial behaviors 05-10 有理有据 comfortable and convenient air travel seat spacious fast free drink and food flight attendant baggage Coherence and cohesion连贯与衔接 使用关联词 主题明确 Lexical resource词汇资源 正式用语 A lot of， a great many a great deal Let interest enable to lead to Nice good-looking pleasant and enjoyable tasty 避免重复 Advantage—benefit， strength， merit Disadvantage—drawback， weakness， demerit 中式英语 接触信息 access Grammatical range and accuracy语法结构的范围和准确性 语法准确：不要双谓语，不要缺谓语 Eg. One solution is to encourage people to sort garbage. Internet-addicted children tend to isolated and self-centered. 使用复杂从句 Eg. They tend to be more independent, which is a very important factor in academic study and research, as well as giving them an advantage in terms of coping with the challenges of student life. 大总结： 5分作文：(a) 文章是扣题的，但是对问题的回应不够有力；(b) 文章结构清晰，但是逻辑并不严密；(c) 语法错误10+个；(d) 初中词汇多（或者字典英语多）；句子以简单句为主（或者长句子多但都是错的） 6分作文：(a) 文章扣题，但是对问题的回应说服力不强；(b) 文章结构清晰，有段内的逻辑关系，但是不严密；(c) 语法错误6-8个；(d) 有一些精彩的词汇，但是也有误用的词汇，句子有较多的复杂句出现，但是其中至少一半有小错 7分作文：(a) 文章总体扣题，有比较强的说服力，但是局部有废话或者不扣题的句子；(b) 文章结构清晰，有段内的逻辑关系，偶尔会让读者困惑；(c) 语法错误4-5个；(d) 有一些精彩的词汇，但是也有误用的词汇；句子有较多的复杂句出现，但是其中20%有小错 6． Things I need to do to prepare for the writing parts Vocabulary Sample writing Sentence Write Revise passion， plan， performance， persistence lecture