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* 以下为作文语言形式单一化的常见类型: 1. 一味地使用短句或短句有余而长句不足。（写短句是 绝大多数学生的普遍倾向。学生认识误区：写短句比 较有把握，不容易出错，似乎安全系数大些。） 2. 有些简单而又互相联系的思想内容，分散地用几个单独的句子来表达。松散的结构难以体现句子间的关系，使人摸不准作者头脑中依次形成的逻辑关联。 3. 句句皆是“主语+谓语+宾语”、“主语+系动词+表语”等主语领先句，同一结构的堆积成为写作技巧上的一个缺陷。 4. 语态“从一而终”；多见简单句、陈述句。 5. 某一段落句子开头主语从头到尾一词用到底。 即使作文的语法、词汇及内容无可挑剔，如果学生不能灵活掌握语言形式，结果也会或多或少影响到语言内容的表达，难于达到理想的表达效果。 1. 恰如其分地合理穿插使用长句、短句两种句子。 2. 用并列句、复合句来表达互相有联系的思想内容。 3. 开头成份多样化。选用不定式、分词、介词等短 语作状语开句；采取多种从句或形式主语开句； 还可以选择设问句、倒装句、祈使句、强调句等 句型开句。 句型变化手段丰富多采。主动语态、被动语态交替使用；既大量用陈述句，也适当使用疑问句；简单句、复合句变化运用。 遣词造句形式多元化。句子开头，以表示人、物的名词或代词做主语；通过人称及单复数变化改换主语；同时还可用it为形式主语。 　　你在写下篇作文时，将如何运用上面的方法写出多样的句型？ Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Dating Is Popular with College Students. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese: 大学生对校园恋爱并不陌生； 对此方方面面态度不一； 谈谈你的观点。 Dating Is Popular with College Students Dating is a concept not far away from college students. On campus some lovers walk hand in hand, and some kiss or hug in public. When the majority of one’s close friends are in committed (有密切关系的) relationships, to get rid of loneliness, some will date fellow classmates, while others are in long-distance relationships. Different people show different attitudes. Young lovers say they have right and freedom to fall in love. Some parents think college students mature a litter faster, but it’s not good to start dating too early, and they should tell dating from marriage. Some teachers are worried that dating might be a great distraction (分散) from their schoolwork. School authorities (官方) neither encourage nor discourage it. In my opinion, striking a balance between learning and dating is science as well as art. Students may benefit from these relationships. To balance work and play, they encourage each other to work hard. They can work more efficiently (有效率地) this way. So they get