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* 写作练习讲评 优秀作文： 27分 彭灏 (4班) 陈宝强 (3班) 26-24分 宁楚涵、甘湘萌、陈欢欢、王树鑫、宋倩倩、于铭凯、张耀辉、邴子越、江健、郑嘉梁、赵迪、柴春婷、张粟乔 出现的较为集中的错误： 部分同学基础知识不扎实，词性不分；名词、动词单复数混乱。 少要点，发挥不充分，字数不够。 书写不规范，字迹潦草，大小写乱用。 想一想,下列句子中有什么小错误? 应该怎么改正? 1. My new school in Sifang Qingdao. My new school is in Sifang Qingdao. My new school lies in Sifang Qingdao. My new school is situated (located) in Sifang Qingdao. In Sifang Qingdao lies my new school which covers an area of 60mu and has a history of over 50 years. 2. My new school has 3 teaching building, a lab building and 2 playground. 英语中表示“某地有某物”应该使用的句型是… there be… There are 3 teaching buildings, a lab building as well as 2 playgrounds in my new school. 3. The teachers are around 200. The students are 10 times more than teachers. 这两个句子犯的错误都是：句子主语判断错误 The number of teachers is around 200. There are about 200 teachers in our school. The number of students is 10 times more than that of teachers. There are 10 times as many students as teachers in our school. 如何提升自己的作文层次？ 例1. I won’t feel bored in my class because I have many friends and they always tell me some jokes. …because I have many friends who always tell me jokes. …because I have many friends who always cheer me up whenever I am in a bad mood. 例2. There are 45 students in my class. Most of them are very active. There are 45 students in my class, most of whom are friendly and active. 方法：不要仍停留在初中的知识层面，多使用高中阶段所学的词汇、短语、句型。学会熟练运用各种语法，尤其重视复合句的应用。广泛阅读、多积累。 Where there is a will, there is a way. 佳作赏析： Today is my first day at No.17 High School. I love this school. It leaves a good impression on me, so I’m introducing it to you. My new school is located in Sifang Qingdao. It covers an area of 60mu. My school isn’t far from my home, so I can go to school on foot. There are 3 teaching buildings, a lab building and 2 playgrounds in it. My school is quite beautiful, surrounded by trees.