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?写作要领和技巧1．?审题与构思 2．?展开段落3. ?修改定稿l?基本要求硬件要求1）作文紧扣题目。2）字数要够。3）段落清晰，建议采用三段式结构。4）卷面整洁，字迹清楚。软件要求 1) 重点突出，简明扼要2）文理通顺，前后连贯3）合乎英语语法规范，写出正确的句子，诸如主谓一致，时态，语态，情态使用合理，关系代词或指示代词的遗志，从句的安排，以及标点符号的使用要恰当等。4）要注意句型的多样化，有短句也有一些长句，有简单句也有复合句。不能通篇使用同一个主语或同一种句型。例：The people enjoying the cool could be heard talking at times. Across the starless sky the lightning without thunder could be seen at times, and then, in the flash the trembling willows were visible. After the flash, all was in the pitch dark. ?Gradually, the people enjoying the cool dispersed and it could be seen that all round became quiet. Then a distant thunder could be heard and frogs stopped croaking as if frightened by the thunder. The wind rose again and the willow leaves could be seen resulting. 修改后：?The voices of the people enjoying the cool came in snatches. From time to time a silent flash of lightning splashed the starless sky with a harsh blue glare and for one startled moment showed the weeping willows by the pond, drooping and trembling over the water. Then suddenly, darkness reigned again. ?Then, one by one, people who had enjoyed the cool air drifted away and silence closed in on all sides. A rumble of distant thunder seemed to frighten even the frogs into silence: a breeze sprang up again, rustling the leaves of the willows. l?作文评分范例分析?In our everyday life, we often meet some people who ask us for help. What shall we do??Of course, helping others is a virtue, but in some cases, we will have say “no”. For example, if what others want you to do is unreasonable or even illegal, you should say “no” without any hesitation. Everyone has his own principle of doing things, and we won’t do anything opposite to the right principle. If we did, it would do nothing but harm to both of us and others. In some cases, if the request from others is reasonable but beyond your ability, what you should do is just to say “no”. Never promise others what you can’t do. If you can’t keep your promise, you will be consi