篇选精育教中高--析分例案与巧技业专作写语英.ppt

Make comments according to the following assessments(评价标准)！ A student’s sample * 公布分析发财 The Person I Admire Most In my life many people are well worth admiring, but the person I admire most is Liu Xiang, who is one of the best athletes in our country. His spirit and great determination inspire me most. He likes singing and surfing the Internet. Liu Xiang like sports when he was very little. At first his parents wanted him to give it up. However, Liu made up his mind to continue his dream.?He trained very hard. In the end, he set the best record of 12.88 seconds in 110-meter hurdles. His succeed makes Liu more confident, and now he’s eyeing the 2008 Olympics in Beijing. In a word, I am deeply moved by his spirit. We can achieve our goals in life only with this spirit. 评价标准Assessment Yes No Take notes Structure paragraphing topic sentence X His spirit and ... * 公布分析发财 The Person I Admire Most In my life many people are well worth admiring, but the person I admire most is Liu Xiang, who is one of the best athletes in our country. His spirit and great determination inspire me most. He likes singing and surfing the Internet. Liu Xiang like sports when he was very little. At first his parents wanted him to give it up. However, Liu made up his mind to continue his dream.?He trained very hard. In the end, he set the best record of 12.88 seconds in 110-meter hurdles. His succeed makes Liu more confident, and now he’s eyeing the 2008 Olympics in Beijing. In a word, I am deeply moved by his spirit. We can achieve our goals in life only with this spirit. Content to the point details stated X He likes singing and surfing the Internet. * 公布分析发财 The Person I Admire Most In my life many people are well worth admiring, but the person I admire most is Liu Xiang, who is one of the best athletes in our country. His spirit and great determination inspire me most. Liu Xiang like sports when he was very little. At first his parents wanted him to give it up. However, Liu ma