高考英语作文---建议.pptVIP

layout(结构) useful expressions How to write a letter of suggestion Homework: Write a letter of suggestion about this class to me at 958587841@ The transitional words(衔接词) that may help you to connect the clauses: firstly, secondly, thirdly…finally on the one hand, on the other hand; first of all, furthermore, last but not least …… 1.……had better do sth. 2. I would like to do sth. 3. Its a good idea to do sth. 4. If I were you, I would do sth. 5. I suggest that ……should…… 6. I think it would be more beneficial（有益的） if you could…… Paragraph2 Company Logo LOGO To make our school more attractive, do you have any suggestions? Who can make our suggestions come true ? headmaster How should we give suggestions to him? By talking to him directly or some other ways? By writing a letter of suggestion How should we give suggestions to him? Persuasive Writing Letter of Suggestion Read the sample writing quickly and find out whether we have missed something. April 27, 2015 Dear headmaster, Im Li Hua. I’m writing to advice you to make some changes about our school library. First of all, it would be better if the library is equipped with better central air conditioner, because it is beneficial for us to concentrate on our study. Furthermore, as is known to us, drinking much water is crucial to our health, so my suggestion is that there should be a water dispenser in every reading room . Last but not least, I would like to suggest that the library should be open to the students on weekends. I do hope you can take my suggestions into consideration and make reforms in the library, so the library may take on a new look as soon as possible. Looking forward to your reply. Sincerely, Li Hua April 27, 2015 Date Dear headmaster, Beginning Im Li Hua. I’m writing to advice you to make some changes about our school library. First of all, it would be better if the library is equipped with better central air conditioner, because it is beneficial for us to concen