书面表达训练之句型结构.pptVIP

要想作文得分高， 高级结构很重要。 句子简单等级低， 总是复合太费力。 结构单一惹人恼， 富于变化是高招。 定状名从用得巧， 形式主宾要记牢。 分词结构不能少， 独立主格可以要。 介词短语要想到。 With结构跟着跑。 句子强调显得好， 陈述不如倒装妙。 仔细观察下面图画，请你给《21世纪报》，写一篇100字左右的短文文章，描述一下你在路上所见的事，并就骑车人---李平的行为，简单阐明自己的感想。 Picture 1 Liping was …with … She rode so … that ….an old lady who was … Instead of …,Liping … her. She …in a hurry Not until …did she find …. When she..., she found …still there holding…/with… She felt sorry for what …. …, I think it is necessary for us to …./that… Liping was …with … She rode so … that ….an old lady who was … Instead of …,Liping … her. She …in a hurry Not until …did she find …. When she..., she found …still there holding…/with… She felt sorry for what …. …, I think it is necessary for us to …./that… One day Li Ping was riding fast in the street, with a box on the bike. Thinking about something, she didn’t notice an old lady crossing the street, and it was too late to stop. Knocked down to the ground, the old lady couldn’t get up herself. Instead of / without helping her, LiPing scolded her and rode away. But It was not until Li Ping stopped her bicycle that she was surprised to find her new shoes missing. She hurried back and found the old lady still there holding her shoes in her hands. She was sorry for what she had done and apologized to the lady. From this, I think it is necessary that everybody should be kind to each other. Never do as Li Pin did to the old, or you will feel greatly sorry. 书面表达专项训练之 22 The girl is Mary. We saw her yesterday.(定语从句） The girl is Mary. She had run away. I didn’t realize it. （状语从句） She had run away I realized it. Xiao Ming was always late for school. His teacher didn’t know why. (宾语从句) His teacher didn’t know . . we saw yesterday before why Xiao Ming was always late for school 我弟弟是一个大学生，喜欢帮助别人. My brother, , is glad to help others.