中考写作辅导课件.ppt

２０１０　玉树 She needs a house to live in. She needs some books to read She needs to study in a school. She needs warm clothes to wear and enough food to eat She should have some friends so that she can’t feel lonely. Boys and girls, People in Yushu are suffering from the earthquake. Many students like Linlin can’t go to school. Let’s help them. We can give away our old books and clothes to them. We could donate our pocket money to them too.We can hold a charity show to raise money to help them build their new homes. We can also be volunteers to help them .They are our sisters and brothers. Show your hands, let’s help them together! 玉树地震牵动着全国人民的心，我校三（5）班同学积极响应，班长王冰对他们的援助计划进行了调查。假设你是班长，请用英语写一篇短文，内容包括：调查结果以及对玉树人民的祝愿。 要求： 词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 注意适当发挥，祝愿至少两点。 I’m the monitor of Class 5, Grade 9. I did a survey in my class on how to help the people in Yushu. Here are the results. Forty percent of the students in our class prefer to donate their pocket money, books, chothes and other useful things to the people in disaster areas. Twenty-nine percent of the students want to hold a charity show to raise money for them. Nineteen percent of the students would rather be pen friends with them. They want to make them feel hopeful and helpful. Twelve percent students would like to be volunteers. They want to help them rebuild their home. Let’s work together, we believe Yushu will have a bright future. 　 格式对，人称吻; ???? 字数够，时态准； ???? 书写好，立意高; ????? 好句多，关联妙; ???? 段落清，标点到。 2010年以来，人类面临着越来越多的生存考验：地震、干旱、火山喷发……。由于自然灾难频发，我们的地球已不堪重负。作为地球的主人—人类，该做些什么呢？假如你是校学生会主席David，请你以学生会的名义，根据下面的图示内容向全校学生发出倡议：号召大家保护环境，共同维护我们的美好家园。 要求：图示信息要全；词数90左右；语言流畅；语句规范。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：blow away吹走；刮走 running water 流淌的水 turn off the taps 关水龙头 Dear students, 　　 Our Earth is at a critical moment now. More and more disasters are hitting our planet — the only living place for humans in the universe. So we have to do all we can to protect our home. Firstly, __________________________________________