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Writing task 1 剑桥七的考官范文1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Model answer The graph illustrates changes in the amount of beef, lamb, chicken and fish consumed in a particular European country between 1979 and 2004. In 1979 beef was by far the most popular of these foods, with about 225 grams consumed per person per week. Lamb and chicken were eaten in similar quantities (around 150 grams), while much less fish was consumed (just over 50 grams). However, during this 25-year period the consumption of beef and lamb fell dramatically to approximately 100 grams and 55 grams respectively. The consumption of fish also declined, but much less significantly to just below 50 grams, so although it remained the least popular food, consumption levels were the most stable. The consumption of chicken, on the other hand, showed an upward trend, overtaking that of lamb in 1980 and that of beef in 1989. By 2004 it had soared to almost 250 grams per person per week. Overall, the graph shows how the consumption of chicken increased dramatically while the popularity of these other foods decreased over the period. (175 words) 分析点评： 本文主体第一段先写明了起始时间1979年的情况，紧接着两个段落对四条线进行了分组：beef，lamb，fish都在下降， 分为一段来写，而chicken在上升，放在另一段来写，既描述清楚了总体趋势，又加强了四种食物之间的比较对比，思路清晰连贯，内容详略得当。结尾段概括了总体特征，其实也可以放在开头段的第二句话的位置来写。 本文还有一个亮点值得考生关注：数据的比较对比，只是高分作文的必然要求。体现在语言上，范文使用了比较级和最高级，使用了表示比较对比的标志词，比如similar，while，also，overtaking等等。 Writing task 1 剑桥七的考官范文2 The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. The charts compare the sources of electricity in Australia and France in