江苏省扬州市2016年中考英语复习研讨会— 写作指导课—江都国际学校 张勇 （共23张PPT）.ppt

书面表达技巧指导 江都区国际学校 张 勇 Good articles must be revised again and again. 好文章是改出来的。 -----Hemingway Learning objectives By the end of the class, we students are expected to 1. improve our writing ability by evaluating（评价） or bettering others’ compositions. 2. know how to better our own compositions. make topic sentences for the article Tip6. Make sure your handwriting is nice Better others’ compositions * * * 美国当代小说家、诺贝尔文学奖获得者海明威，写作态度极其严肃，十分重视作品的修改。他的长篇小说《永别了，武器》，初稿写了6个月，修改花了5个月，清样出来后还在改，最后一页共改了 39 次才满意。 一档文17-20分: ， ， (至少2-3个), 基本无语 法错误(1-2个错误)，或有少量由于使用复杂结 构而引起的语法或拼写错误, 但不影响意义理解。 中考写作评分标准 Tip1. Make the composition complete Tip2. Write topic sentences for different parts Tip3. Use proper conjunctions Tip4. Use compound sentences Tip5. Add proverbs if necessary Tip6. Make sure your handwriting is nice 写出全部内容要点 层次清楚 语言流畅 有句式变化，有复杂结构 2015年扬州中考作文： ------ 对我的影响 1. ------ 2. ------ 成功原因 1. 个头矮小，梦想进入NBA 2. 一直为梦想而奋斗 3. 1985年成为NBA球员 基本情况 Spud Webb The person who has influenced me most is Spud Webb. Spud Webb was born in the USA, in 1963. ________ ___________________________________________________________________________ 人生如旅，在你的成长过程中，许多人感动着你，影响着你，如：父母、老师、朋友、故事人物…….最近你市正举行以“The person who has influenced me most”为题的中学生英语征文活动，Spud Webb 深深地影响着你，请根据表中的内容要点完成征文。 The person who has influenced me most is Spud Webb. Spud Webb was born in the USA, in 1963. He was very short but he dreamt of becoming a member of the NBA. He didn’t give up his dream until his dream came true. I think two reasons make him successful. First, he never gave up and tried to do better. Second, he practised hard and bec