玉溪市英语名师工作室：解析学业水平考试英语书面表达专题（共28张PPT）.ppt

解析学业水平考试英语书面表达专题 2014-5-22 澄江六中 吴仕荣 学习目标 1.了解写作的篇章技巧，使文章具有整体性。 2.掌握常用的连接词或句型，令作文更有灵气 3.通过学和练提高写作的技巧和自信。 Revision 记叙文的写作要素 议论文和说明文的写作要素 应用文的写作要素 记叙文的写作要素： 5W 1H When Where Who What 开门见山，交待事情的....... How Why 说明事情的经过，描述原因 What 总结 写作技能 1. 谋篇布局 ——写好篇章结构 2. 运用连接词 ——赋予语言灵气 谋篇布局——写好篇章结构 范文1： 在日常生活中你主动帮助你的父母做家务活吗？请你根据提示用英语写一篇80字左右的短文，描述你平时所做家务以及你对家务的看法。提示：1.扔垃圾 2. 扫地 3. 帮助妈妈做饭.4.洗衣服 5. 为花浇水 6. 饭后洗碗要求：语句通畅，语法正确。 不得逐句翻译。 满分作文 （10分） As we all know, it’s important to help parents do housework during our daily life. I often help them do housework. I throw the rubbish away and clean the floor in the morning. I help my mother cook lunch . After supper, I always wash dishes . I think it can make my parents feel more enjoyable after work. I always wash clothes for my family. Besides, watering the flowers is also my duty. I like them very much and take good care of them. In a word, the more housework I do, the happier my parents will be.（即总括又阐明看法） 谋篇布局——写好篇章结构 Good beginning is half done. 1. 仔细审题，提炼和归纳主题句 2. 开头万能句型： 1) ....plays an important part in the... 2) As we all know, ... becomes more and more.... 3) As everybody knows, ...is one of the most...in .... 4) Many people say that.... But I don’t think so. 5) I will never forget the .... Make a topic sentence. Make a topic sentence. Make a topic sentence. 结尾画龙点睛，首尾呼应 1. 与开头呼应，再次重申自己的观点, 注意避免重复句式。 2. 结尾经典词组、句型： At last/ Finally ... 最后 In a word, ... 总而言之 In short, ... 简言之 We hope that··· 我们希望 Let’s try our best to .... I believe if we can..., ... will be .... What a ...! / How...! Make a concluding sentence Let’s try our best to be a green consumer. In one word, it’s necessary for us to protect the environment. How beautiful Beijing is! Why not come to Beijing and enjoy yourself? 正文：语言简洁，层次分明 长句短句交叉使用最好。 基础一般的同学要尽量使用简单句，文章算不上完美，但很实用。 把握要点，层次清晰。 注意句子与句子、段与段之间过渡自然，行文连贯，注意适当使用连词， 例如：and ,so ,or, but, become等等。