第八讲 汉译英方法技巧指南.pptVIP

第八讲;一、怎样才能译出地道的英语 二、汉译英表达五戒 三、汉译英主干及信息重心的确立;一、怎样才能译出地道的英语;（一）译文必须符合英语的句法套式 汉语句子形式自由。许多情况下句子无主语，句子的其他语法要素可以呈现多样的排列方式。讲究音韵，朗朗上口。 英语句子讲究语法要素（主语、谓语）的到位和完整性。三种轴心框架： 主—谓—宾 主—系—表 there be 汉译英时，往往要进行信息调整和结构整合，译成英语的“形合”句式，即：外形完整，结构严谨，主要的语法要素不能缺失，善于把各种修饰关系和逻辑关系用关联词表达出来。 英译汉时，句法主要是“分”；汉译英时，句法主要是“合”。;例：在四川省的西部，有一美妙的去处。她背依岷山主峰雪宝顶，树木苍翠，花香袭人，鸟声婉转，流水潺潺。这就是松潘县的黄龙。 译1：In the west part of Sichuan Province, there is a beautiful scenic spot. It is beneath Xuebaoding —the main peak of Minshan Mountains. The forests are lush green; the flowers are fragrant; the birds are singing; and the streams are bubbling. This is Huang Long (Yellow Dragon) of Songpan County. 译2：Situated in Songpan County in the western part of Sichuan Province of China is Huang Long (Yellow Dragon) scenic spot. Standing against Xuebaoding — the main peak of Minshan Mountains, the beautiful spot is a must for tourists who will be attracted by its lush green forests, fragrant flowers, murmuring streams, lovely birds and many other kinds of natural charm.;（二）译文必须有逻辑性，且要表达自然 汉语的各种逻辑关系多呈隐蔽式，较少使用关联词。英语的各种逻辑关系（时间、假设、因果、转折、比较……等等）多呈彰显式，以关联词作为明显标志。因此，汉译英时，应适当、自然地补加关联词。;例：平日，工作太忙，或交际太繁，你难得能与古今中外的智者交谈。而今，你可凝视屏息，侧耳倾听，精心阅读，令学识渐长；你还可以依随自己的爱好，去干任何一件感兴趣的事情。静听音乐，挥毫作画，“收拾”残局，甚至，翻阅影集，遥思亲人。这些无不是人生一乐！ At other times you may be so occupied with your work or social intercourse that you barely have time for books. Now you can concentrate upon reading the wise of all times and all lands so as to absorb their brilliant ideas and extend your horizon. Or you can do what ever you are interested in — such as finding entertainment in listening to music, in drawing pictures or playing Chinese chess. If you are in the mood, you may well open an album and let the photos bring back memories of your dear ones now far away. All these are really pleasure in life, aren’t they?;（三）译文必须符合英语的惯用法 有些译文从语法角度看似乎是对的，但英语国家的读者读起来会觉得费解，其原因在于译文不符合英语的习惯表达。 Chinglish 例：我吃不惯这种食品。 原译：I’m not accustomed to this food. 改译：This