高中英语学习方法技巧点拨.pptVIP

2008年高考英语试卷分析书面表达专题; 假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫（panda），一直通过有关网站（website）关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信： 1. 自我介绍； 2. 祝贺苏琳生日； 3. 感谢工作人员； 4. 索取苏琳三岁生日照。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头语已为你写好。 ?; 写作部分评价 以书信为题材，话题贴近学生生活，写起来不容易走题。内容提示详尽，但是学生自我发挥空间不大，关键在于词、短语、句子的灵活使用。该题要点“自我介绍”容易诱导考生写出暴露自己真实姓名、学校、地区的信息。另外，考生容易漏掉的两个潜在要点：“信息来源”、“合适结尾”。 ?; 2008年高考英语书面表达评分细则 ;1.大错指句子结构,谓语构成,时态,语态,从句(缺句子成分),非谓语结构(主谓不一致)等,评卷应画出长线标记. ??? 小错指名词单复数,拼写,标点符号,大小写,介词误用等,评卷应画出短线. ?2.抄写与主题无关内容,或没写任何内容画0 ?;?问题主要表现在以下方面： ;be的误用 ?;非谓语动词的使用错误 ?;其它错误 ?;答题不规范造成的失分现象 ?;辣火之月把试考 英语话题大熊猫 中外结合真巧妙 怜我水平并不高 主客卷首姓名标 诚心问声苏琳好 特地感谢工作员 还望收到工作照;仅因一个标点错误扣掉一分（24分） Dear Sir/Madam, Greetings from China! My name is li Hua， I am always interested in the pandas from an early age. I’m more than excited to get the news that your panda Sulin is going to celebrate her a 3 years’ birthday. As I have been caring for Sulin and her mother White Cloud since 3 years ago, I think it’s necessary for me to express my thanks to the workers, who are donated to the lovely one all these years. I’m now eager to have a photo of Su Lin at her third birthday, which will be an unforgettable memory in my mind forever. Thank you for taking your time to read my letter, and look forward to your reply. Yours truly, Li Hua ?;满分作文欣赏 Dear Sir/Madam, Greetings from China! My name is Li Hua. I’m a warm-hearted student who has developed a love for pandas since childhood. I’ve always been so concerned by the little panda “Sulin” and its mother “Baiyun” that I’ve been keeping an eye on them through some websites all the time. Now I’d like to express something to you as Sulin is going to be three. First, I want to deliver my sincere wishes that I hope Sulin can enjoy a delightful birthday. Then, I’m eager to express my appreciation to all the staffs attending to the pandas through