托福写作讲座7[突破英语等级考试].pptVIP

高分手段：强调句、同位语、后置定语 Although a small company provides some benefits, it is in a big company that one has access to more and better opportunities. 大公司能提供更多更好的机会。 这是一个关系到生死的问题，任何国家都不能忽视。 This is a problem of life-and-death, a matter no country can afford to ignore. 一个典型的例子就是随处可见的家蝇。 A good example is the housefly, found almost everywhere on Earth. 高分手段：用同位语和后置定语取代定语从句 我喜欢工作时间比较少的工作。I prefer jobs with shorter working hours. 我喜欢收入比较高的工作。I prefer high-paying jobs. I prefer jobs with high salaries. ‘贪恋’这个词用英语怎么说？ The love of money is a root of all evils, because of which some, aspiring after money, have been led away from the faith and pierced themselves through with great pain and grief. No luxury /extravagance or hedonism will be tolerated. He bargained /traded away his freedom for a little comfort. ‘贪恋’这个词用英语怎么说？ He indulged himself in /was obsessed (infatuated) with the comfort of urban life and forgot the essence /the essential meaning of a pure and simple life. He succumbed to the temptation of urban comfort and left the essence of pure and simple life behind. He bargained /traded away his pure and simple life for urban comfort. 托福写作7：有表现力的词汇和句子 Making good use of expressive words and sentences ‘贪恋’这个词用英语怎么说？ 贪恋： ①不是自己的，但是很想要 ②贪婪，得到了还想要 ③不舍得，该放弃不放弃 比如：贪恋女色、钱财、富贵 crave for /covet beauty, money, wealth; lust for/after (succumb to the temptation of) beauty, money, wealth; reluctant to part with /(covetously) cling to beauty, money, wealth ‘贪恋’这个词用英语怎么说？ 1. 贪财是万恶之首；有人贪恋钱财,就受迷惑,离弃了信仰,用许多苦痛把自己刺透了。 2. 不可骄奢淫逸，不可贪恋享受。 3. 他贪恋舒适而牺牲了自由。 4. 他贪恋舒适的城市生活，忘记了返璞归真的真谛。 托福作文金字塔 Pyramid 使用有表现力的词汇和句子 第一节：托福写作的用词原则：准确、多样性、有表现力 第二节：高分句型：主语多样化（不用人做主语），插入成分，平行并列结构，倒装句（作文中至少有一个），强调句（作文中至少有两个），同位语和后置定语，少用定语从句 准确：词义表达要准确、词性表达需准确、词组搭配也要准确 He was scared /scarce by the movie. Going to movies gives her a great release /relief. Going to movies allows her to release her press /pressure. Gambling leads to great lost /loss /lose. 准确：词义表达要准确、词性表达需准确、词组搭配也要准确 It is also important to build up p