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C段：逐条反驳段 Furthermore, apart from the qualifications or degrees, the candidates for teaching staff must succeed in their demo classes, a key step of an interview, to show their interaction and communication with students. In contrast, even though they own Doctor’s Degrees, the symbol of sufficient knowledge, they will eventually turn out to be unqualified for being teachers if they fail in winning students’ appreciation. D段：己方理由段 而且，一个乐观和容易相处的、与学生保持良好关系的老师将会激发学生们对于学习这门学科更大的兴趣。 根据最近一项在中国高中校园的调查，67%的学生把“我喜欢这个老师”作为他们喜欢某一门课的主要原因，而这展示了老师与学生保持好关系能力的重要性。 理论——数据型 D段：己方理由段 Also, an optimistic and easy-going teacher who has a good relationship with his or her students will stimulate their greater interests in studying the discipline. According to a recent survey on campus of Chinese high schools, more than 67% of students rated ‘I like the teacher’ as their major cause for being fond of a certain course, which demonstrates the significance of teachers’ ability to relate well with students. 作业：思考题 Renewable sources of energy (sun, wind and tide) will soon replace traditional sources of energy (coal, oil and gas). The best way to improve education is to raise teachers’ salaries. Only movies that teach us something about real life are worth watching. 交锋式写作法 环球北美考试院院长 祁连山老师 第二课 交锋式写作框架 一、独立写作授课重点 二、逻辑思维 三、独立写作篇章框架 四、开头段写法 一、授课重点 传统写作教学的误区： 模板 句型 词汇 2.授课重点 Structure Point Language Logical Thinking 二、逻辑思维 Everyone should know where the nearest fire alarming box is located, and where exits, fire escapes and fire doors are. 1 2 3 I wanted her to know that my heart was with her, and that I thought England owed her a great debt and was going to miss her. 1 2 3 4 5 But we remember with far greater pain that we did not see that beauty when it flowered, that we failed to respond with love when it was tendered. 1 2 4 3 5 English and Chinese thinking 三、Structure:篇章框架 段落 一边倒式 让步式 平衡式 A段 观点 观点 观点 B段