英语四级语句写作常见错误.ppt

常见写作常见错误 1.中式英语 1.He advised me to do an honest man. He advised me to make an honest man. He advised me to be an honest man. 2.we’re difficult to finish all the work tonight. It is difficult for us to finish all the work tonight. We have difficulty finishing all the work tonight. 4.He is much better after the operation. He is no longer dangerous. He is much better after the operation. He is no longer in danger. 5.He only said a few sentences. He made us very disappointing. He only said a few sentences and made us very disappointed. 2.语言结构错误 2.1 Fragmentary sentences (破句) 　破句是把不完整的句子当作独立的子句来写作时发生的错误。常见错误包括：从属连词引起的破句，ing分词和不定式结构引起的错误，增添细节引起的破句和缺少主语的破句。 　　 例如： After I arrived in Chicago by bus. I checked into a room. Then I went to a diner to get something to eat。 　　★修改原则：改正从属连词引起的破句时，可以把该从句附属于其前或其后某个子句上。也可以去掉破句中的连词。 　　I arrived in Chicago by bus and found a place to stay. Then I went to a diner to get something to eat。 　　 1.He staggered along the trail. Without taking a rest or eating anything. He staggered along the trail without taking a rest or eating anything. 2.Many people who were delivering bricks. Many people who were delivering bricks witnessed the accident. 3.Bicycles are so popular in China. Bicycles are so popular in China that almost every family has at least one. 4. Since we graduated from high school. We have not seen each other for years since we graduated from high school. 当然，对于其它形式的破句，可以根据不同情况给予改正。如，改正-ing结构引起的破句时，可以把它附属在其前或其后的某个句子上，可以添加主语，把-ing形式改变成谓语动词，把being形式改成作谓语的be动词(is, are, was, were, am );改正不定式结构引起的破句时，可以把它附属于前句上;改正添加细节引起的破句时，可以把它附属在前面一个表达完整思想的句子上;可以给破句加上主语和动词使它成为一个独立子句;可以尽可能改变词序，辅以增减词，使破句成为前句的组成部分;改正缺少主语的破句时，可以把它附属于前句上，也可以给破句添加主语(通常是指代前句主语的代词形式)。 2.2. Run-on Sentences (串句) 　　串句是不用连词和标点而把两个(或以上)独立的句子串在一起的错误表达。有些串句是不用任何标点间隔两个甚至更多的句子;有些串句是在该用句号时滥用逗号，忽略了英语语言中的逗号本身没有连接句子的功能这一原则。 　　例如： 　　 Rita decided to stop smoking she didn’t want to die of lung cancer。 　　The exam was postponed the class was canceled as well。 　　★修改原则