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托福教案原则：1尽量用中文思考好，提纲; 提纲乃精华，需要稀释。2大方向定了之后， 应该有2-3点小观点来支撑。各小观点间不应有交集；小论点则是中心句；忍住 “，+because”的冲动。3，Draft 草稿, 300字以上即可接受4, 简单清晰； imagination translation;大学生毕业之后有很大的就业压力和很大的无奈 After graduation, college students have a lot of employment pressure and despair.Every year, thousands and thousands of college students leave school and flood into the marekts. They stand in long lines and fight each other for a small job. Most of them have no luck. For the lucky ones, they only get 800 yuan amonth, which is not enough for a basic life in the cities. 人们饱受污染之痛 People suffer terribly from pollution. People dirk dirty water, cough in dirty air and eat poisonous food. They are troubled with one disease or another. they cry and struggle under the grey sky.VS People drink dirty water and cough in dirty air. They are troubled with one disease or another. They cry and struggle under the grey sky. 如今人们普遍虐待动物 abuse animals Today， people generally abuse animals. Today, we often see cold-blooded people throw cats out of windows, kick dogs in streets, and run after poor pets with a huge stick in hand. Nowadays, we often see old, sick, lonely and disabled dogs, cats, pigs and even chickens wander in the streets, hide in dark corners and eat in dirty dustbins. They look at humans from a distance with a scared heart. 扣题 （A D: people should buy products made in their own countries, even if the price is higher than in other countries）连贯 1, 关联词于是，结果就是thus, so that, as a result, consequently, therefore, accordingly; 另外 in addition, besides, on the one hand, on the other hand, for one thing, for another2，定语从句那个生产多过消费的群体 That group where the production is more than the consumption. I still remember the winter day when I had your hand in mine. 词汇 （用平， 用小，用活, 3-4级左右）语法：定语从句，表语从句，同位语从句，定语从句，状语从句状语从句和主句最好做到一对一如果去西方国家读书，那么可以接受更好的教育，因为那里的学校，教师和知识都更好 （下句不妥）If one goes to the western countries to study, he is likely to get better education, because there are better universities, professors and more advanced k