第06周 感谢信高中英语书面表达18周满分计划2018年版原卷.doc

第06周 感谢信 01 　假定你是李华，在感恩节来临之际，请你给任教期满已回国的外教Peter写一封感谢信。要点如下： 1.老师在学习和生活上对你的帮助； 2.表达感激之情及祝愿。 注意：1.词数0左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 【写作指导】本题要求写一封感谢信回忆过去外教Peter对自己的帮助时，可用一般过去时，表达感激之情及祝愿时应用一般现在时。这个命题涉及中华传统文化所推崇的感恩这一优秀品质，又涉及西方文化中的感恩节，内容贴近考生日常生活，易于考生动笔。 【范文赏析】Dear Peter, Thanksgiving is drawing near! I am writing to express my thanks to you. Without your help, I would not have achieved much in learning English last year. Moreover, you offered so much encouragement while I was in low spirits. Thanks to your help, I became more confident and spent more time reading English books. The efforts have paid off and now English is my favorite subject. Thank you for entering my world and I will always remember what you have done for me. Wish you all the best. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【亮点点击】 短文主题明确,重点突出,关联词语运用得恰到好处。难能可贵的是,短文使用了较多的复杂结构和高级表达方式，使短文增彩不少。 亮点词汇：express one’s thanks to sb., achieve, in low spirits, spend time doing sth., pay off等 高级句式：时间状语从句(while I was in low spirits)；宾语从句(what you have done for me)等。 假如你是李华，在过去一周你在英国参加中学生文化交流活动，其间，一直住在你的英国好友Peter家，现在已经回国，请你根据以下要点给他写一封感谢信。要点包括 1.表达感激之情； 2.回忆各种收获； 3.发出邀请。 注意：词数100左右。 【写作指导】书面表达考查考生运用已有的知识和技能来进行思想交流完成特定的交际任务的能力。本篇书面表达所设置的情景是感谢在英国参加中学生文化交流活动期间Peter对你的帮助为应用文中的感谢信,是书面表达中常见的考查类型。写作时宜用第一人称时态以过去时和将来时为主。感谢信的语言要真诚感谢的事由要具体。根据题干的要点提示本篇书面表达的正文部分可分三段来写： 第一段：开门见山,说明写信目的——表达谢意。 第二段：简述收获，表达谢意。准确明了地写出对方对自己的帮助或付出并表示感谢。 第三段：发出邀请。合乎礼节，情真意切。重申对对方的感激之情并希望给予回报。 【范文赏析】Dear Peter, I am writing to convey my gratitude for your kind help and care during my stay in your country, without which I wouldn’t have enjoyed it so much. Guided by you, I had a chance to visit some places of interest in England and experience such unique culture as well as beautiful scenery. Thanks to your generous help, I do believe that I have a better understanding of your country and culture. What’s more, during the week, the comfortable room, delicious meals and especially your friendly family made me feel at home. I will be more than pleased if I have the opportunity to repay your