论著写作-20140316PPT.ppt

生物医学英文论著写作;医学英文论著写作（绍兴班）日程;一、研究与论著;研究立题;一、研究与论著;二、论著的内在要素：科学内涵和表达形式;二、论著的内在要素：科学内涵和表达形式;三、论著写作基本构成的写作要领;基本构成及其要点; 单词选择原则 A. 准确（precise） B. 简单（simple） C. 必要（necessary） D. 熟悉（familiar） E. 区别相似而不相同的单词; 1. 准确（precise） 描述事物特点采用最切合的单词，避免用一些不明确的单词。;Example Renal blood flow was drastically compromised when the aorta was obstructed. Revision 1 Renal blood flow was reduced by 80% when the aorta was obstructed. Revision 2 Renal blood flow was greatly decreased when the aorta was obstructed.;Example Animals were studied in utero 4-9 weeks later. Example The short-circuit current remained increased for several hours.;Example The change in short-circuit current produced by 10-5 M major basic protein was 85% of the maximal response to isoproterenol. A higher concentration of major basic protein would therefore probably have produced only a minimal further increase in the short-circuit current.;Example In isolated, perfused dog lungs, infusion of serotonin was associated with an increase in microvascular pressure. Revision 1 In isolated, perfused dog lungs, infusion of serotonin caused (or resulted in, or led to ) an increase in microvascular pressure. Revision 2 In isolated, perfused dog lungs, infusion of serotonin increased microvascular pressure.; 2. 简单（simple） 论著中用的单词（尤其是非专业用语）应尽可能简单，要用常用词汇，不要用冷僻词汇。;Example All heat-stable materials utilized in the isolation and processing of solution to be injected into mice were sterilized prior to use. Revision All heat-stable materials used in the isolation and processing of solution to be injected into mice were sterilized before use.;Example The Doppler signal displayed continuous, low-frequency blood flow that was directed hepatopatally. Revision The Doppler signal displayed continuous, low-frequency blood flow that was directed toward the liver.;3. 必要（necessary） 省略不重要的重复或无意义的词汇，保留句子中明确说明信息的词汇。 Example After 4 h of hemodialysis, we abruptly ended the hemodialy