江苏省徐州市高三英语写作专题复习课件 新课标 人教版.ppt

* * 1. 覆盖所有的语言要点。 内容要点可用不同 方式表达。对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。2. 应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性。值得注意的是 语法结构或词汇方面虽有些许错误, 但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致; 具有较强的语言运用能力。 1 汉语式英语 2 句式单一 平铺直叙 3 无过渡语 Common mistakes in writing 　如何在写作中避免句式单一 Rewrite the sentences 1. They arrived at the school. They felt the happy atmosphere. 2. I will be given another chance. I will succeed. 3. He wants to improve his English. He studies hard. 方法一. 使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档 When they arrived at the school, they felt the happy atmosphere. Arriving at the school, they felt the happy atmosphere. If I am given another chance, I will succeed. Given another chance, I will succeed. In order to improve his English, he studies hard. 方法一. 使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档 Complete the sentences with non-predicate (非谓语动词) 听到这个消息,他们变的很激动. _________the news, they got excited. 2. 尽管被告知许多遍,他仍然重复这个错. __________________many times, he still repeated the mistake. 3.除非被邀请发言,你应该在会议上保持沉默. Unless ________to speak, you should keep silent at the meeting. Hearing Having been told invited Translate the following sentences by using non-predicate (非谓语动词) 1,面对困难时，他从不放弃。 2，引入市场后，该产品大获成功。 3，做完作业后，他回家了。 Faced with/Facing difficulties, he never gives up. Introduced to the market, the product made a great success. Having finished his homework, he returned home. 方法二. 巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力 1. He didn’t realize his foolishness until he returned home. Not until 2.We can save the earth by changing the way we live. Only 3.He is clever but he does not work hard. as/though 4. The clock tower stands on the other side of the street. On the other side of the street Complete the sentences he returned home did he realize his foolishness. by changing the way we live can we save the earth. Clever he is, he does not work hard. stands the clock tower. 方法二. 巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力 Translate the sentences by using Inverted Sentences(倒装句) 1. 他从不说关于他家庭的事. 2. 只有我们每个人都意识到水的重要性