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7、增加（补充） In addition (besides) Moreover 此外 Furthermore (what is more) 还有 8、原因、结果 Therefore (so) 因此 As a result (consequently) 结果 Because of this Thus consequently 9、结尾（总结） In conclusion In brief In my opinion (to my mind) Broaden Ideas Accumulate materials For example: Free Admission to Museums 好处： 开阔个人视野，增长知识，激发个人兴趣，对各种文化增进了解和认识 (widen one’s horizon, enrich one’s knowledge, stimulate/motivate one’s interest, promote understanding and appreciation of our diverse cultures) 满足公众文化需求 (meet the cultural needs of the public) 弘扬民族文化/展示璀璨的历史和文化 (carry forward national culture, showcase splendid/brilliant history and culture) 坏处： 大量涌入旅游景点的游客对文物保护构成潜在威胁 (Too many visitors flooding/pouring into/swarming into museums pose potential risks to the preservation of cultural relics. ) 很难保护展品 (a difficult job for museums to maintain their collections) 拥挤的人群造成管理困难和安全隐患，不法分子趁机盗取文物 (overcrowded visitors, manage, potential security problems, steal cultural relics) 没有了门票收入，博物馆面临财政困难，很难更新展品和安全设施，不能更好地保护文物和服务大众 (without profits from the admission fee, face financial problems/burden, update collections and security means) 参观者不文明的行为影响了参观环境 (uncivil/bad-mannered) 我的观点： 1)赞同，但需要改进 2)针对特殊人群如学生和老人实行免费 3)不免费，但降低门票吸引更多参观者 限制每天参观人数 (limit the number of visitors) 国家需投入大量资金采用先进的保护科技和手段，更新安全设施，更好地保护文物 (increase funding/investment, finance, update) 提高管理水平，改善服务设施 提供免费展览资料，方便参观者参观；通过宣传资料和标语引导参观者文明参观 (public information, slogan) 如何开阔思路，积累观点 很多话题论据相似 1)Preserve the rare species/endangered animals/wildlife. The habitats of some animals are being destroyed and therefore they are in real danger of dying out. Provide better conditions and professional care and treatment. 2)act as an ideal scientific research center, conduct experiments 3)play an educational role, enrich our knowledge and widen our horizon 4)boost the local economy, increase the government revenue, earn foreign currency and improve the living standard of the locals, relieve the pressure of unemployment 5)enhance mutual understanding, re