2018浙江新高考之概要写作summary writing.pptxVIP

Summary WritingWhat is “summary”?A summary is a brief restatement of the essential thought of a longer composition. 概要是一篇较长文章本质思想的简洁重述，它要求用尽量少的语言对原文的主旨进行复述。概要不是简单的换句话说，更不是评论，而是作者思想中最基本部分的准确再现。How to get a high mark? 《考试说明》中评分标准规定概要写 作阅卷时按5个档次给分，其中最高档次第五档（21-25points）：理解准确，涵盖全部要点；能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇；完全使用自己的语言；有效使用了语句间的连接成分，使完成的概要结构紧凑。contents (内容)language skills (语言)structure (结构)a good summaryright spelling, proper punctuationall the key pointsgrammar, vocabularytight and coherent(连贯)your own wordsabout 60-80 wordsHow to writing a good summary? 定位 find out the essential information改写 rewrite the information in your own words核查 check the sentences and add some conjunctionsA.定位 通过阅读定位语篇的核心信息，包括核心单词，核心短语和核心句子。 （句子为主，以单词和短语为辅） 1. 确定文体 the types of the passagetypeskey information记叙文narration人物+时间+地点+事件（起因+发展+结果）说明文exposition描写某事物的性质功用。即“对象+性质功用+利好”；针对某个问题提出解决方法或措施。即“问题+解决方法”；介绍某现象及其原因和结果。即“现象+原因+结果”议论文argumentation论点+论据(+结论)√√2. 消减事例（尽量减少实事，大胆省略实事）essential information3. 省略细节 In the early 16th century, people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease, as medical opinion had it that washing off dirt with hot water could open up the skin and let ills in. A particular danger was thought to lie in public baths. By 1538, the French king had closed the bath houses in his kingdom. So did the king of English in 1546.B. 改写 在核心信息的基础上进行语言表达形式的改写，对原文的语言表达形式尽可能实现大规模的改变。 改写过程中，原则上字数不超过原句，不改变原文的逻辑结构，充分考虑语句压缩。1. 使用近义词或反义词study ifTo research whether such a “sixth sense” really exists, Robert Baker performed two experiments.carried out/ did/madeNever will Zhou Yang forget his first assignment as a journalist.Zhou Yang will remember his first task as a reporter.2.把短语变为单词Cleaning away dirt is good to health.Cleaning away dirt benefits health.3.使用广义词(general words)代替具体词(specific words)She brought home several Chinese and English novels, a few copies of Time and Newsweek, and some textbooks.She brought home a lot of books and magazines.4.消除重复He didn’t like the city. He ha