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This was an added embarrassment. (又是一件难堪事) Mr Roosevelt invited me to join him at dinner in his villa. “Let us make it a family affair,” he said. (家常便饭) * hhjkl The telephone announced that the Ambassador must see me at once and was on his way. He arrived with unusual perturbation. (他来时，神色……) * hhjkl 3．忌洋腔洋调 舍弃合适而流畅的中文不用，而硬要仿照英文格式翻译出既不符合汉语规范、又不适合中国人习惯的译文。 * hhjkl We were told that the new leader was going to speak to us. He was so arrogant that no one will keep company with him。 他很狂妄自大，谁也不愿与他交往。 * hhjkl 为了使译文做到句简词精，可以从三个方面着手： 适当运用词组； 讲究中文的对仗； 注意译文音调的和谐。 * hhjkl 词组： But there is a great difference between the two gardens: the one is conventional in every respect, the other natural. (未能脱俗……野趣天成) I felt anxious about the effect of this prolonged and acrimonious discussion. (旷日持久、用语刻薄的……) * hhjkl He is a jovial giant, with a huge appetite for food, drink and women. 他生性乐观，身材魁梧，贪吃贪喝又贪色。 * hhjkl He was mature in years and tried in wars, but had the old, inbred arrogance of his family. 他正当年壮，久经沙场，但是却带有他的家族那种年深日久、代代相传的傲慢习气。 * hhjkl The second world war bought him rapid battle promotion, but only to a temporary rank in the lowest grade of general officer. ……屡建战功，晋升很快，但不过是被授予将级军官中最低一级的军衔，且为时不长。 * hhjkl It was a punishing job, with an awe-inspiring daily dosage of reading. ……苦差使，每天阅读量之大，使人望而生畏。 * hhjkl ijfhf vvvvt ijfhf vvvvt ijfhf vvvvt ijfhf vvvvt ijfhf vvvvt ijfhf vvvvt ijfhf vvvvt ijfhf vvvvt ijfhf vvvvt ijfhf vvvvt ijfhf vvvvt ijfhf vvvvt Lecture Eighteen Polishing 词语润色 * hhjkl Main Contents of This Lecture I. Definition II. Ways of Polishing * hhjkl I. Definition 词语润色（Polishing） 润饰文字，英语叫 polish，中文叫“琢磨”，是从制玉器时精细加工引申出来的意义。译文章，同制玉器一样，初具规模以后，还得精细加工，务求达意传神。这是翻译工作的最后一道工序，也是极重要的一个技巧。 * hhjkl II. Ways of Polishing 润饰文字，可以从三个方面入手 i)文理通顺（严谨） Ii). 句简词精（琢磨） Iii).达意传神（创新）。 * hhjkl i). 文理通顺 讲究中文语法和逻辑的严谨，反复推敲，一丝不苟，尽力做到忠实通顺。 1．注意中文的语法 2．注意译文是否已确切表达出原文的实质内容 3．注意逻辑关系 4．遣词用字注意避免引起误解 * hhjkl 1．注意中文的语法 简单地说，翻译是以英文句子为“蓝本”，照着英文意思和形式造中文句子，中英文语法不同，表现方式不同，英语句子往往又是冗