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第 PAGE 5 页 共 NUMPAGES 10 页 此次作业完成的认真细致，分析比较详尽，解析言之成理（药理）的友好几组，但最值得肯定的是梁莹组和陈冠琼组。大家可互相参考。 国贸031班 梁莹、张玉明、冯诗卉、陈双萍 After-class practice 要求：以下是某厂家销售“乌鸡白风丸”所附的中文说明书与英译文。仔细分析中文原文的文字特征及其信息特征，从作为消费者的英语读者接受的信息需求特征角度看，从经济简明和信息结构层次明晰的翻译原则看，如何改进现有的英译文，请提交一份经过修订的英译文，并附有理据说明。 具有补气养血，调经止带之功效，主治气血两虚引起的身体瘦弱（指虚弱，并不指瘦）、腰酸腿软、阴虚（原因）盗汗（症状），经血不调，子宫虚寒（？）、行经腹痛、崩漏带下（重复）、产后失血等症。 方中专饲专供的纯种优质乌鸡，补肝肾、养气血（重复），养阴退热之功效显著。全方配伍，药性平和，不寒不躁（即平和也！），最适合（“最”得没道理，难道比较适合的是男士？）妇女补血调经之用，尤其是在透达血分虚热方面功效更为显著。 The WUJI BAIFENG BOLUS has the effect of invigorating the vital energy and nourishing blood, regulating menstruation and stopping leukorrhea. It is suitable for treatment of symptoms caused by deficiency of both the vital energy and blood, such as weakness and leanness, lassitude in the loins and knees, night sweat due to insufficiency of refined materials in the viscera, irregular menstruation( repetition!), asthenia-cold of uterus, dysmenorrhea, leukorrhagia and postpartum bleeding. The silky fowl？in the prescription (处方子中有竹丝鸡?)is specially bred and supplied, quality and purebred, which, which has the remarkable effect on nourishing the liver ad kidney, invigorating the vital energy and blood, nourishing the refined materials in the viscera and clearing away pathogenic heat. The medicine(西药), with even property, neither cold nor dry ( 该药本身既不是寒冷的也不是干燥的), is most suitable for nourishing blood and regulating menstruation ( repeated 3 times) in women, especially efficacious on expelling pathogenic heat due to deficiency from blood system. 分析： 1、 首先，Nourish, keep (a person, an animal or a plant) alive and well with food.在这里用于形容“养血”不大恰当。“调经止带”：调，指调理、调养，regulate means controlling or directing sth. by means of rules and restrictions; adjusting (an apparatus, a mechanism) so that it functions as desire，是调节、控制的意思。止，这里并非停止之意, 是减少白带过多的流量，调节其达到正常的状态。而Stop是 put an end to or cause to halt or pause的意思，用在这里明显不符合事实。 其实，“补气养血”，强调养生养息，与“调经止带”乃药物之功效，行文上与后面主治疾病内容上有重复之味。而译文过于直译中文的意思，但中医诊断治疗的据理及表述无法确保外国读者是否能理解，不如考虑省去直译“补气养血，