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Unit 2 写作讲评;I. 题目：现今，生活在北京这个大都市，人们可以享受很交通方面的便利，同时也受到很多交通问题的困扰。请根据以下内容要点，写一篇短文，陈述北京交通状况，并针对其中一个问题，提出建议：;II．Layout ;问题---结构;问题---结构;Correct the mistakes;Correct the mistakes;A Tip：可以用被动语态;Use of words: convenient;☆ Version;However, there are many things which could be improved. The main problem is the traffic jams in rush hours. It makes people stressed out because they are often late for school or work. Worse still, the number of private cars goes up quickly, resulting in heavier air pollution. Besides, the noises made by cars have a bad effect on people’s daily life. To avoid more traffic jams, we’d better choose public transport instead of private cars. It will also do good to our environment. ;学生作品; On the other hand, there’re many things which need to be improved. Above all, people especially students may easily get stuck in traffic jams during rush hours. Besides, a large number of private cars cause serious air pollution. Last but not least, there’re not enough parking lots for cars, which bothers more and more car owners.; To sum up, transport system in Beijing is well developed but it is obviously not perfect. In my opinion, as for the traffic jams, the government should call on more people to take public transport. People who take public transport to go to work or school should be praised. 101高一1班 张戎捷 13分