政府工作报告--英文翻译分析.pptVIP

政论文大多主题明确，议论生动，体不诡异，辞不险怪，体现出“意与理胜”的特点。一年一度的《政府工作报告》是中国政府向其人民代表所做的工作总结和工作部署。总结的是建设中国特色社会主义所取得的新成就，部署的是国家针对国情的大政方针和政策措施。作为政论文的典型文本，《政府工作报告》所具有的特点不仅是具体的，而且也是政论文的基本共性所在。 Chinese original ：继续推动多哈回合谈判，反对各种形式的保护主义，促进国际经济秩序朝着更加公正、合理、共赢的方向发展。 English version ：We will continue to give impetus to the Doha round of trade talks, oppose protectionism in all forms, and work to make the international economic order more just, equitable and mutually beneficial. Excellent or not ：not excellent enough Reason ：What’s “多哈回合谈判” ? The translator should provide the background. My improved version ：We will continue to give impetus to the Doha round of trade talks ( Each round of trade talks is named after the location where they were initiated. Doha is named for the city of Doha in the country of Qatar, where negotiations began in 2001.), oppose protectionism in all forms, and work to make the international economic order more just, equitable and mutually beneficial. Chinese original ：一是认真治理政府工作人员以权谋私和渎职侵权问题。针对工程建设、土地使用权出让和矿产资源开发、 国有产权交易、政府采购等重点领域存在的问题，加大查处违法违纪案件工作力 度，坚决惩处腐败分子。 English version ：First, we will conscientiously clear up problems related to government employees who abuse power for personal gain, neglect their duties, or infringe upon other’s rights, exploitation of mineral resources, trading of state-owned property rights, and government procurement, we will intensify investigations and prosecutions of violations of the law or discipline and resolutely punish corruptionist . Excellent or not ：Not excellent enough. Reason ：The SL has two sentences, which is brief and to the point. However, the TL combined two sentences into one. The English version is hard to comprehend. Meanwhile, “or” there isn’t logical. My improved version ：First, we will conscientiously clear up problems related to government employees who abuse power for personal gain, neglect their duties. As for exploitation of mineral resources, trading of state-owned property rights, and government