英语人教版九年级全册how to better a writing.pptVIP

;中考作文评分标准;;A piece of writing from a student(学生作文）;Better the layout (布局) Better the grammar Better the vocabulary (词汇) Better the sentences Better the logic (逻辑) ;;Basic layout基本结构;Para. 3 conclusion ;;Common mistakes in grammar 常见语法错误 ;Example; Hello, my dear friends. As we all know, reading is very important for us. It can makes us understand the world, and it can make us feel relaxing. I want to make more people like reading, so I have some good suggestion. We can build lots of small libraries in the city. If there are more new books, people are more interested in reading. We should keep the reading room quietly and clean. It is a public place. You cant make sound or put rubbish on the ground. I hope my advices could be good. More people will like reading.;;1. 我希望你能帮助我。; 1. It can make us understand the world, and it can make us feel relaxed. 2. We should keep the reading room quiet and clean. 3. You cant make sound or put rubbish on the ground. 4. I hope my advice can be good. More people will like reading.;;1. 他得了第一名，感到很惊喜。; 1. I want to make more people like reading. I have some good suggestions. ___ _____ ___ make more people like reading, I have some good suggestions. We can build lots of small libraries in the city. Lots of small libraries can ____ _____ in the city. 3. You cant make noise, and you can’t throw rubbish on the ground. You are not _______ ____ make any noise ____ throw rubbish on the ground. ;;表并列：and, both… and…; as well as… 表转折：but, yet, however … 表因果：because, so, as a result… 表递进：not only…but also…; what’s more… 表结果：so …that… ; such… that… ; 表先后：First, Second, Third, Next, Finally… 表时间：when, while, after, before, as soon as … ; I like Liu Qian.;He did magic shows ___ well ____everyone was surprised.;_________ he is very young, he has won many prizes.; Hello, my dear friends. As we all know, reading is