英语人教版九年级全册人物写作.pptVIP

Writing 青河县完全中学 刘晓红 话题一 人物介绍 基础篇 【话题解读】 人物介绍是记叙文中常见的一种写作类型，内容可以是介绍自己，也可以是介绍别人。在写此类文章时，通常需要对人物进行由具体到抽象、由上到下、由外部到内在性格特点的描写，这也是描写人物的基本顺序。注意在结尾处简单做一个小结或概括。同时还应考虑具体的写作要求，突出重点。 【真题回放】 校团委准备在教师节举行征文活动，请根据提示，回想自己在学习生活中遇到的最喜欢的一位老师，以“My Favorite Teacher”为题，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。 内容包括： 1. 对老师的相貌描写； 2. 喜欢老师的原因：①讲课很好；②与学生做朋友；③…… 要求： 1. 所写内容应包括所提供的信息，可适当发挥； 2. 不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。(2016 山东济南) 【真题分析】 该书面表达要求介绍自己最喜欢的一位老师，属于人物介绍。按照提示内容，具体可以分三段来写： 第一段描写老师的外貌特征； 第二段说明喜欢老师的原因，其中第三点可以从老师的兴趣爱好、性格特点、行为习惯等方面来写； 最后一段可以对老师做一个总体评价。 【标准范文】 My Favorite Teacher Everyone has his favorite teacher, and so do I. My favorite teacher is Ms. Wang, our Chinese teacher. She is about 30 years old. She is a little short and thin and has big eyes. Why do I like Ms. Wang? Firstly, her classes are interesting; She explains things clearly and makes them easy to understand. Secondly, she is very friendly and is like a friend to us. Thirdly, she not only teaches us lessons, but also teaches us how to become a better person. I am lucky to be a student of Ms. Wang. She is really a wonderful teacher! 人物介绍 提高篇 【高分突破】 My Favorite Teacher Of all my teachers, there is one teacher whom I love and admire the most. She is Ms Wang, my Chinese teacher. Ms Wang is a pretty young lady. She is short and slim with long curly hair. I like Ms Wang because of the following reasons: First, she is an ideal teacher.She has all those qualities which a good teacher is expected to have. Second, she is easy to talk to. We all regard her as a friend more than a teacher. Third, Ms Wang gives equalattention to all her students. In her eyes, each student is an angel. Ms Wang is a role model to all of us. I hope to be like her one day. 【高分揭秘】 1. 习作既有对老师外貌的描写，也给出了喜欢老师的三个原因，符合写作任务的内容要求。 2. 习作句式丰富，既有简单句，也有复杂一些的定语从句。习作中还用了admire, expect, regard ... as ..., equal attention, role model等较高级的词汇，给习作增色不少。 3. 习作中连接词First, Second 和Third 的使用使习作逻辑结构清晰、过渡自然。 4. 习作结构紧凑，由开头的there is one teacher whom I love an