英语人教版九年级全册写作指导课 课件.ppt

All I really want to do is, baby, be friends with you!;Brainstorm 头脑风暴;⑴ What’s his/her name? ⑵ Where is he/she from? ⑶ How old is he/she? ⑷ What is he/she like? ⑸ What does he/she like?⑹ What’s his/her personality（性格）? ⑺ What’s his/her dream? ⑻ Why is he/she your friend？ …… ;Mary; Hi, everyone. I’m Mary from L.A. I was born in Feb,1992. Do U want to be my e-pal? I am a schoolgirl of Grade 9. I have long hair, big blue eyes but I’m not tall. I am healthy because I like sports a lot. Unlike most girls, I like playing soccer. But, I play tennis better than soccer, I like tennis so much. In my free time I like watching TV and chatting with Tommy, my brother. My friends say I am outgoing and I think sometimes I am very quiet. But if my brother call me Lazy Bone, I could be very CRAZY~! I like traveling, too. I have been to Canada and Japan, and I hope I can visit Beijing this summer holiday (Oh~! Beijing Duck, my favorite :p ). So I want to make a Beijing e-pal here to tell me something about China 4 me. I hope I can become a diplomat when I am 30. Then I can go to different places. ? ? ?;my new e-pal;1. Are the tense(时态), spelling(拼写), punctuation(标点) and capitalization (大写字母)correct? 2. Is your e-mail complete(完整的)? 3. Are your sentences coherent and fluent (连贯流畅的) ? 4. Do you write in a concise（简洁的）way?