英语人教版九年级全册中考作文专题复习---写人 教学设计.docx

中考专题复习——英语作文--写人 安宁中学 强乃宁 一、教学目标： 1. Learn how to write a composition about a person; 2. Learn some skills of improving a composition. 教学重点：教会学生如何写关于人的作文。 教学难点：如何使用高级词汇和漂亮的句子在作文当中。 二、学生自己尝试体验文章 How time flies! I will graduate from junior high school in about 90 days. But I will still remember a person --- my teacher. Let me tell you something about her. She is my English teacher. Her name is Lucy. She is about 30 years old. She is of medium height. She has long hair. She wears glasses. She is friendly. When I have some questions in English, she helps me with my English. Now my English is good. I like my English teacher. 这篇文章的缺点有哪些？ __________________________________________________________________ 三、五步写作法 Step 1 decide who you want to write Step 2 from what aspects(方面) Step 3 express your thanks or love to him/her Step 4 decide person(人称) and tense(时态) Step 5 make a draft(打草稿) 四、如何润色草稿 Use better words and sentences Use connection words(连接词) Use rhetorical devices (修辞手法) Use proper sayings(谚语) Make the sentences more smooth(流利的) Avoid Chinglish(避免汉语式表达) Copy the final version(定稿) 每一条给出学生一些范例，帮助学生理解。 五、实战演练：修改范文，给文章润色 范文第一段：How time flies! I will graduate from junior high school in about 90 days. But I will still remember a person --- my teacher. Let me tell you something about her. 请修改并优化第一段： ________________________________________________________________ （第二段第三段也是如此进行） 六、当堂过手 请将下列常见题目补全成叙事类作文并选取一个题目进行写作。 My______ I want to say thank you to _________ A wonderful/beautiful_______(昆,15，B) I can’t/will never forget __________ The most important person in my life? Happy memories with____________ ? 7. I love __________(昆,16,B) 课堂上留出七八分钟时间让学生写作。 七、课堂小结 八、作业布置