翻译过程中存在的一些问题讲义.ppt

2．…and it is at this moment that we see both WEISS and HARLOWE join the men on the heavy log to lend their support to it. [原译文]就在这时，我们看到韦斯和哈洛都加入到这伙人中，握住木头助上一臂之力。 3. Coming home from school that dark winter’s day so long ago, I was filled with anticipation. [原译文]在很久以前一个昏暗的冬天，我放学回家，心中充满了期待。 九．音韵不美 1．So they look for land that no one else wants. [原译文] 所以他们就去寻找没有什么人要的地。 2． Much of the country has already been clear-cut, and soil erosion has been extensive. [原译文]这个国家许多地区的树木已被砍伐殆尽，而且土地流失范围十分广。 [参考译文] 在这个国家，许多地区的树木已砍伐殆尽，水土流失面积一直扩大。 * Thank you! 翻译过程中存在的一些问题 一．粗心大意 对原文理解不够 1．There are large communities of Laotians, Vietnamese, Cambodians, Mexicans, Salvadorans, Guatemalans, Iranians, Japanese, Koreans, Armenians, Chinese. [原译文]这里有规模很大的社区，住着老挝人、越南人、柬埔寨人、墨西哥人、萨尔瓦多人、危地马拉人、伊朗人、日本人、韩国人、亚美尼亚人以及中国人。 1．There are large communities of Laotians, Vietnamese, Cambodians, Mexicans, Salvadorans, Guatemalans, Iranians, Japanese, Koreans, Armenians, Chinese. [参考译文]老挝人、越南人、柬埔寨人、墨西哥人、萨尔瓦多人、危地马拉人、伊朗人、日本人、韩国人、亚美尼亚人以及中国人都有各自的社区，这些社区都很大 2．And most of all, he bought the run-down Gordon Arms Hotel and totally restored it, transforming it from a mess into a glorious first-class hotel with 30 handsomely furnished rooms, wood-paneled stairs, false bookshelves with fake leather books and an outstanding restaurant. [原译文]而最重要的，是他将年久失修的戈登?阿姆斯旅馆买下并完全改装，将这堆废墟变成了一个富丽堂皇的一流宾馆，内有30间装修华丽的房间，木质镶嵌的楼梯，摆满了人造皮革装订的书籍的书架，和一间高级餐厅。 3．Edgar Burchell, the janitor who became a leading medical scientist and teacher, is an example. [原译]埃德加·伯切尔，那个后来成为卓越的医学家、教师的大楼管理工，就是一个例子。 改译：埃德加·伯切尔就是一个例子。过去他是个大楼管理工，现在却是一名有影响的医学家和导师了。 4．“You may think I have a lot of garbage in these bags,” one shopping-bag lady volunteered over lunch in a church soap kitchen,” … [原译] “你可能以为我这些袋袋里是一堆垃圾，”一位流浪女士在一个教堂的施汤处一边吃饭一边主动说道， …… 二．词义选择不当 We can make those days comfortable by giving her painkillers and sleeping pills. [原译文]我们可以把这几天弄得舒服些，办法是给她用止痛片和