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襄阳是一座闻名遐迩的历史古城，几千年来积淀绽放出一朵朵绚丽的奇葩。美丽襄阳之行即将启程，市旅游局正在招募一批志愿者担当导游，向国内外友人介绍襄阳的历史文化及巨大变化。请根据提示写了一篇导游讲解说词。 1、襄阳是一座古城，历史文化灿烂悠久。 2、襄阳风景秀丽，有众多旅游胜地（如古隆中，鹿门寺）和特色小吃，吸引着大量的中外游客前来观光、品尝。 3、近几年来襄阳发生了翻天覆地的变化，焕然一新的城市面貌令襄阳人民无比骄傲自豪。 Hello，everyone. I’m your tour guide. Welcome to Xiangyang! It is a wonderful place to take a visit. First all of, it is an ancient city with a long history and colorful culture. For instance, you can find many old buildings where some famous people in history used to live. Besides, it has many fascinating sights, including Gu Longzhong and Lumen Temple. What’s more, it is also an excellent place to try local specials, such as beef noodles and Datou Cai. Because of these, it attracts thousands of tourists both at home and abroad to come here every year. Another great thing about Xiangyang is that great changes have taken place in recent years. Now it is much greener and more beautiful than it used to be. And the new look makes people here very proud of it. Finally, I hope you can have a great trip! details (细节） 3 linking words (连接词） 1 topic sentence主题句 2 4 A good article has: Presentation 亲爱的同学，你将初中毕业了。在这三年的学习生活中，你一定结交了许多的好朋友，请用英语写一篇短文，介绍你的一位好朋友Li Lei. 要点提示：1. 他乐于助人，性格外向，兴趣广泛 2. 他成绩优秀，经常在学习上帮助我 3.我准备送他一个…以表示感谢 4.我对他的祝福和希望 要求：1.词数90词左右 2.短文需包括所有要点，但不要逐条翻译，可适当增加细节，使其连贯，通顺，文中不得出现真实的人名，学校等相关信息。 1. what youll mainly write about? Write a topic sentence for it. 2. which points need to write more! Give some important words. Sample We are graduating from school soon. I miss so many good friends, especially my best friend-Li Lei. Li Lei is a top student. He is outgoing and hard-working. He has a lot of interests and is always ready to help others. We get on well with each other so we often discuss our study together and he can always find out new ways to help me work out problems. I’m so proud of him. I care so much about him that I