（新高考 新课件）【外研版】20版必修三Unit 5 Writing .pptVIP

Unit 5　What an adventure! 　 Writing about a diving experience 【文体解读】 1. 话题特点 故事性记叙文是以叙事为主要方式、以写人物的经历和事物发展变化为主要内容的一种文体。在写作时, 要把握好记叙文的六个要素, 即五个W和一个H, 时间(when), 地点(where), 人物(who), 事件(what), 原因(why)和过程(how)。 结构: 常见的故事性记叙文的结构常分为三段: 第一段: 交代事情发生的时间、地点、人物等要素。 第二段: 进一步叙述发生了什么事以及如何发生的, 在必要时可加入冲突, 以达到故事高潮。 第三段: 结尾要尽量自然, 做到水到渠成, 可适当谈一下自己的感想, 发表自己的看法, 以达到升华文章主题的目的, 但不宜过多。 2. 话题词汇 ①hear听到 ②consider考虑 ③intend打算 ④meet遇到 ⑤find发现 ⑥adventure冒险 ⑦experience经历 ⑧start out/off出发 ⑨without delay/hesitation毫不迟延/犹豫 ⑩learn. . . by heart记住 3. 话题句式(试着替换黑体部分, 变成你需要 表达的意思) ①Seeing this/Hearing this, I ran over to him as soon as possible. 看见/听见这种情况, 我尽快朝他跑了过去。 ②I was taking a walk by the lake when I saw a man fall off the bicycle . 我正在湖边散步, 这时我看见一个人从自行车上摔了 下来。 ③Without hesitation/Without a word, I decided to help him . 二话没说, 我决定去帮助他。 ④What surprised/attracted/delighted us most was that the sky was so clear . 最使我们吃惊的(吸引我们的/使我们高兴的)是那里的 天空这么晴朗。 ⑤Tired as we were, we learned what we couldn’t learn in school . 尽管很累, 但我们学到了在学校学不到的东西。 ⑥I’ll never forget the day which/that we spent on the farm . 我永远都不会忘记在农场度过的这天。 【布局】 如何写好故事性记叙文 【范例点评】 My Experience in the Morning Fog Fog is a natural phenomenon. It usually appears in the morning, which makes people can’t see clearly. It is Tuesday today. I got up very early to do some jogging as usual. When I got out of the building, I found that I was surrounded by the fog. I didn’t know whether I was in a dream or not, because everything was not clear. The street lights seemed far away, like stars in the sky. I couldn’t see anything or anybody three meters away. I could only hear some sounds. Suddenly I heard the sound of a car, but when the driver saw me, the car almost knocked me down. It’s too dangerous, but I was safe. Just my hair was wet. The morning fog was gradually disappearing when the sun rose in the east. All the things were clear again. However, I can never forget this day. 【迁移训练】 　　某英文杂志栏目向读者征集有关消费者受