浙江专版2020中考英语复习方案第一篇教材考点梳理话题写作一课件.pptVIP

话题写作（一） 人物介绍 【话题点睛】 针对名人或周围熟悉的同学、朋友或家人进行描写。主要涉及人 物的经历、变化或自己对该人物的看法等方面。 Teenagers 杂志邀请你参加他们组织的作文比赛 , 作文题目为“ My best friend ”。请根据以下表格提示写一篇短文参赛。 典例分析 Mary Appearance tall and slim, pretty Face long Hair dark brown, short Eyes big, bright Nose small Personality helpful, patient, hard-working … Hobbies singing and dancing What do you think of her and what can you learn from her? [ 要求 ] （ 1 ）短文须包含表格内的所有信息 , 可适当发挥以使文章通顺、连贯、完整 ; （ 2 ）词数 :100 左右。 【思路点拨】 1. 找出关键点 : 主体部分是其外貌、性格特征、爱好 ; 2. 列出提纲 : 根据以上三个方面简单列出提纲 ; 3. 明确时态 : 主要使用一般现在时 ; 4. 确定人称 : 第三人称 ; 5. 重点词汇及句型 : （ 1 ） tall and slim, big and bright, like two diamonds, small and short, help sb. with sth., listen to others problems carefully, offer them some advice, the top student, take part in after-school activities, such … that … （ 2 ）由连词 and 和 but 引导的并列句。 【写作架构】 【基础写作】 根据所给提示写句子。 1. 基础句 玛丽是我最好的朋友。她又高又瘦。（ tall and slim ） . → 升格句 （用 who 引导的定语从句表达） . 2. 基础句 她的眼睛又大又亮。（ big and bright ） . → 升格句 （加 like 比喻句） . Mary is my best friend. She is tall and slim. Mary is my best friend. She is a pretty girl who is tall and slim. Her eyes are big and bright. Her eyes are big and bright, like two diamonds. 3. 基础句 她能认真聆听别人的问题。（ listen to ） . → 升格句 （用 offer some advice 丰富句子） . 4. 基础句 她是一个很好的朋友。我想和她成为永远的好朋友。（ want to ） . → 升格句 （用 such … that …改写句子） . She can listen to others problems carefully. She can listen to others problems carefully and offer them some advice. She is a good friend, and I want to be friends with her forever. She is such a good friend that I want to be friends with her forever. 【连句成文】 Mary is my best friend.She is a pretty girl who is tall and slim. Her face is long and she has short dark brown hair. Her eyes are big and bright, like two diamonds, but her nose is small. She is a helpful girl. She often helps me with my English. She is also patient. She can listen to others problems carefully and offer them some advice. She works very hard and is the top student in my class. She likes singing and dancing