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入的内容: 完美雅思 ROCK Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become more useful adults. Let s get ROCKing! Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 入的内容: Nowadays, there is more and more concern about bringing-up children education . People always trap themselves in a dilemma whether children should be encouraged to compete with others or p …find …facing …the …them with … the …s… 一段我省 taught to cooperate to become a u seful person. In my opinion , children should be brought up by 略了原来的第一句话，原话有 encouraging both sense of competition and cooperation. 点多余，开头段直奔主题更好 To begin with, competition always lies behind success. As can be seen obviou sly, schools always 一些。另外，bringing-up children education 英语里似乎 make a policy to give prize to those children who get high marks at school. Through this policy, students are motivated to compete with other students to become the