学生范文11_飞行费用降低带来的环保等问题）.pdfVIP

完美雅思ROCK Let s get ROCKing! Some people think that the increase of cheap air travel has brought about many benefits w hile others argue t hat t his development has its drawbacks to t he world s environment and resources. Discuss these two points of view . W hat s your opinion? Presently the reduced cost of air t ravel allows people to visit different places much easier and faster t han ever, but environmental specialists express worries about its negative impact upon 删除的内容: since the natural environment and resources. (I am of bot h opinions and argue t hat we could work on this development direction for making good use of it.) 美雅思ROCK 点评：这句话表达的不太 清楚。而且类似此类题目（Discuss both views and give your opinion ），可以把你的观点放在 后面也就是第4 段去论述，即先discuss 两方面的观点，然后再给出你自己的观点，这个也 是剑桥7 雅思考官所采用的文章结构，这样写的好处是回应论题要求非常清楚，读者可以很 好地把握你的思路，当然缺点也有，因为很多同学可能觉得对这种结构 有太好的把握。 People used to consider that air t ravel means spending a large amount of money, so they usually 删除的内容: overseas prefer to short-distant trips or even stay at home, enjoying ‘traveling by watching TV programs, which consequently narrows their life circles. However, nowadays, the lower air travel cost 删除的内容: necessarily motivates t hem to explore for exotic experience, which obviously broadens their horizons. In 删除的内容: narrowing addition, wit h fewer expenses on travels, people enjoy better financial conditions on other opport unities to develop in many aspects. For example, they can spend more on advanced 删除的内容: go out education, healt h care and so on thereby lead a more enjoyable life, enriching their mind and 删除的内容: of improving physical health. 完美雅思ROCK 点评：这一段里第一条benefit 的论据还可以，后