[名校]中考初中英语-作文精练含范文.docxVIP

［名校］中考初中英语■作文精练含范文 L写作。(15分) 根据以下提示写一篇60个词左右的短文。要求内容贴切，句意通顺， 无语法错误。Lucy和Lily是双胞胎(twins),她们现在11岁了。5岁时， Lucy会骑自行车、打网球(play tennis).写字，但Lily不会。Lily会游 泳、滑冰、读故事书(story books)o现在她们都学会了跳迪斯科、芭 雷。 她 们 是 对 好 姐 妹 。 【答案】 Lucy and Lily are twins. They are eleven years old now. When Lucy was five, she could ride a bike, play tennis and write. But Lily couldn t. Lily could swim, sing, and read story books at the age of five. Now both of them can dance to disco and perform ballet. They are good twin sisters. 【考点】初中英语知识点?写作 【解析】 试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文要写的材料比拟具体，我们要做 的就是运用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。我们要好好选用词汇和短 语，可以适当发挥。根据材料内容可知描述他们五岁时事情用过去时态, 描述现在的事情用一般现在时态。写作亮点:这篇短文内容切题，意思 连贯，表达清楚、完整。时态应用正确。考点：话题作文。 .书面表达〔共1小题，计15分〕 请用英语以How I learn English?为题，写一段文章，谈一谈你学英 语的方法，感受等。词数不少于 80. 【答案】 How I learn Englishln recent years, learning English is gaining growing popularity with people in different ages. English is a global language. We use it in communication with people from different countries. Nowadays, English has almost become a necessity for everyone living. So learning English is very important to us.Most of us may have such experience in learning English by reciting the words and learning grammars. I used to pay attention to written English so that I have ignored my spoken English. Gradually, I realized my mistake. I start to improve my spoken English now. I no longer confined to learn written English; I want to strengthen listening, speaking, reading and writing . Besides reciting the words and learning grammars, I talk with foreign friends and recite beautiful articles.I firmly believe that, in the near future, my English skills will get to a high level ! 【考点】初中英语知识点?写作 【解析】 试题分析：这篇作文要求我们根据要求,来介绍一下自己学习英语的感 受和方法。题目中没有相关的信息，我们应用正确的英语将内容表达出 来。这些信息包括自己的经历、做法和感受等，写作时，我们可以根据 需要将这些信息进行重新整理和安排，使文章的意思衔接更自然。而且 所使用的词汇和句型，可以是学生们比拟熟悉的，所以将平时的积累发 挥出来就可以。当然我们要尽量使用一些好的句型和连词，使文章上下 文意思连贯，更出彩。写作亮点:这是一篇非常优秀的作文，短文中作 者按照题目的要求，给我们介绍了自己学习英语的经验、看法和感受, 结构清晰，要点全面。作者在写作时，短文中的语言符合英语的表达规 范，而且作者还使用了一些较好的句式，增强了文章的连贯性。如短语 pay attentio