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- Commentaries on the Version of “一个女人是这样衰老的 ” 一个女人是这样衰老的 SV： How a Woman Ages/A Woman’s Aging/A Woman Fades Thus/What causes a Womanto GrowOld/The Wayin Which a womanis Aging/How a Woman Gets Old RV: The Way Woman Withers 点 评 ： Rhetorical Device: distillation and aesthetic hightlights of language, either Chinese or English/The successful employment of alliteration( 头韵 ) 1． 二十岁的时候，我穿着一条背心式牛仔裙在校园里走来走去， 一说话就脸红。三十岁的我穿着名牌套装，坐在办公桌前，满脸 冷酷地对下属说： “这么愚蠢的问题你也敢问？也不先打个草稿。 ” SV: At the age of twenty, I walked about on the campus, wearing a vestlike jean skirt. Myface would turn red whenever I speak. After I have turned thirty, I am seated in front of a bureau, in a suit of famous brand, reproaching a subordinate coldly “ How dare you ask such a stupid question? Why didn ’t you make a draft first? ” RV: At the age of twenty, wearing a jeans jumper, I movedabout .-- - on the campus, myface blushing the momentI had the inclination to make an utterance. At the age of thirty, I, wearing a famous-brand suit and a cold look, reproach my subordinate bluntly, “How can you go so far as to raise such a silly, mindless question? ” 点评： Zeugma( 轭式修饰法 ) ：a figure of speech in which a single word, usually a verb or adjective, is syntactically related to two or more words, though having a different sense in relation to each. More examples: The senator picked up his hat and his courage/She possessed two false teeth and a sympathetic heart/ He lost the game and his temper. 2． 二十岁的时候，从图书馆借的是《莎士比亚全集》