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PAGE 2 高考英语作文巧用连接词 写作任务： 在紧张的高三备考阶段 ,英语老师为了提高复习效率 ,广泛征求学生的意见。假如你叫张华 ,请根据以下提示 ,给英语老师写封信 ,表达你们的需求和建议。 1. 适当放慢速度 ,留出思考时间； 2. 反复训练重要、易错知识点； 3. 指导方法； 4. 减少作业量以保证质量； 5. 给予更多鼓励。 学生习作一 Dear Mr. Wang, I am so pleased that you are willing to share our views. In the course of the general revision, what we need is solid foundation. I hope you slow down your teaching, giving us more time thinking. Practice important points to make sure we can’t make mistakes again. we need your instruction. Please assign us less homework and give us some encouragement from time to time in order that we can do it more efficiently. 学生习作二 Dear Mr. Wang, I am so pleased that you are willing to share our views. In the course of the general revision, what we need is solid foundation. As you know, we didn’t learn well enough in the first two years, so please slow down and make sure we have really mastered something. Besides, we need a little more time to think for ourselves. As for those important points which also make us confused, would you please give us more practice in case we forget? Meanwhile, we need your instruction, for example, in how to write in natural English. I still have another request: assign us less homework and give us some encouragement from time to time in order that we can do it more efficiently. 从上面两篇作文来看,习作一没有运用连接词,整篇文章缺乏连贯性,让我们读起来像是句子翻译,行文不流畅。习作二就大不一样,这位同学恰当地运用了一些连接词,如as you know, so, besides, as for, meanwhile, for example。这些词的运用使全文结构紧凑,层次清楚,过渡自然。行文连贯是英语阅卷老师比较看重的一方面,也是作文得分点之一。很重要的一方面就是适当地使用连接词。 一、使用连接词拓展句子 适当地使用连接词会帮助我们打开思路,拓展我们所要表达的内容,使内容更加丰富。 例1 写作要点：与老师和谐相处的好处,师生关系对你成长的影响。 一般表达法： My teacher has had a strong effect on my personality. Good relationship between teachers and students is worthwhile for everyone to cherish. 加上连接词的表达法： My teacher has had a strong effect on my personality, such as being helpful and considerate, which enables me to grow up healthily. Therefore, good relationship between teachers and students is worthwhile for everyone to cherish. 例2 写作要点：虚假广告给生活