外研高中英语必修第三册 Unit3 Starting out 1课件.pptxVIP

Unit 31 情节编写不和逻辑2 时态错误严重3 动词过去式，过去分词错误drive-drove-drivenhit-hit-hitcatch-caught-caughtthrow-threw-throwntear-tore-torntry-tried-triedwin-won-wonshoot-shot--shotstand--stood---stoodleave-left--leftrun--ran---run4 正确无误的句子很少5 对话过于死板，心里活动，环境描写很少6 缺乏副词形容词的使用，语言贫瘠，情节简陋7 书写潦草 Paul and Becky knew how difficult and hard for the man who rode a bike rapidly. They knew they should do something to help the poor man. So they found something hard in the car and throw it to the wolf. After trying sometimes, they made it! The wolf was annoyed and gave up to catch up Mac. The wolf planned to catch up paul and Becky. Now Mac was out of the danger and took a deep breathe, he pedaled quickly to pull away there.At the moment, Macs friends were successfully to repair their bicycles. Now lets catch up to Mac! One of the friends said. They pedaled sometimes and found a wolf was catch up a car .They were afraid.Suddenly, the car stopped . There was a big rock in front of it ,the car tried to made the wolf hitted the rock. And they made it! The walf was died!范文The car abruptly stopped in front of him. While Becky was opening the rear door of the car,Paul shouted to Mac,Get in the car! Be quick! Mac jumped off the bicycle and got in the car without any hesitation The moment Mac managed to get in, Paul Locked the door right before the wolf could make an attack. It roared outside the car, trying to break the door with its claws.?Fortunately, the car was sturdily made so that the wolf could not break the door or even the window. It seemed that a century had passed. The wolf eventually appeared to be out of patience and left. Before Mac could feel relieved, he suddenly realized that his two friends might be in danger. In no time, Paul started the car and quickly drove back for the other two cyclists.A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived. Thank goodness! You are safe! Mac sighed with relief. Having heard of Macs legendary experience, the two cyclists expressed gratitude to paul and