英语作文写作指导与解读——热点写作话题：教育（以南通二模为例）.docVIP

PAGE PAGE 4 新高考英语作文写作指导与解读——热点写作话题：教育（以南通二模为例） 指导： 如何写概括： 由于这里要描述图的内容，而不用考虑其它文字。至于如何概括图表，我以前文章说的太多了，这里直接写： As the chart shows, students enjoying a harmonious life or fair treatment in their families account for 39% and 31% respectively, while the rest either bear high expectations or are pushed too hard. (33 wds) 写作技能： 一定要把图分成两到三个板块，不能对数据一一描述。我比较喜欢一分为二看数据，实际上高考数据分析也这样。从图能看出来： 好的方面：和谐相处；平等对待 坏的方面：苛刻要求：…… 写作思维： 要点一： 一分为二看：家庭教育涉及到两方：孩子和父母。所以，这个影响必然反映在二者身上了。 （1）对孩子如何：塑造性格 –》原因：父母价值观会影响孩子 （2）对父母如何：父母和孩子之间的关系受到影响。 要点二： 父母和孩子的关系说到底还是人际关系。人际关系一般记住这几个关键词：communication，mutual trust，respect，social bonds 虽然说起来是套路，但想起来确实人与人无非就是以诚相待，尊重等。 Definitely, parental education plays an importantrole in children’s growth. First, it indeed shapes their character. Parents’ outlook on life is mirrored in thier action, encouraging their children to follow suit. Second, it relies on family education whether bonds between parents and children are weakened or strengthened. Personally, ideal family education should focus on sincere communication and mutual trust. This can bridge the generation gap and contribute to children’s mental growth.（因果拓展，说明结果）Besides, parents should show due respect for children, like accepting the differences and listening patiently,（举例思维）instead of acting arbitrarily.（比较思维）Parents’ arrogance, by contrast, will end up paying a high price.（对比思维） In a word, only scientific parental education can bring the best of children, so it deserves the effort and time. (120 wds) 好词好句： plays an important role shape their character outlook on life follow suit relie on focus on mutual trust bridge the generation gap contribute to children’s mental growth showdue respect for act arbitrarily endup paying a high price bring the best of deserve the effort and time. 官方范文： One possible version: Most of the students enjoy a harmonious family atmosphere with equal treatment. However, about 16% of the parentsexpect too much of their children and some are even hard on them. The importanc