英语写作技巧培训.ppt

There are many students want to study Japanese.(有很多学生想学日语．) 应为： My name is XXX, and I came from Xi’an, Shanxi province. My name is XXX, came from xi’an of Shanxi. VI. Chinese English （汉语式表达） 应为： There are many students who want to study Japanese. Chapter Five: Sentence Problems 第三十一页，共六十五页。 应为： Everybody may make mistakes. Nobody never makes mistakes.（没有人不犯错误。） VI. Chinese English （汉语式表达） Chapter Five: Sentence Problems Frustration will trouble you or encourage you depending on your attitude. (挫折对你是困扰还是鼓舞决定于你的态度。) 应为： Whether frustration troubles you or encourages you is decided by your attitude. 第三十二页，共六十五页。 Wu Han is a very hot city in summer. VI. Chinese English （汉语式表达） 应为： It is very hot in Wuhan in summer. Chapter Five: Sentence Problems The students used computers study is very relaxed. 应为： Students’ study with the help of computers can be very relaxed. 第三十三页，共六十五页。 He every morning at six gets up VI. Chinese English （汉语式表达） 应为： He gets up at six every morning. Chapter Five: Sentence Problems Station use the computers sold the tickets. 应为： Computers can be used in railway stations to sell tickets. 第三十四页，共六十五页。 Chapter Six: Sentence Writing Principles II. The Coherence of a Sentence（句子的一致性） Ⅰ.The Unity of a Sentence （句子的统一性） Sentence Writing Principles 第三十五页，共六十五页。 句子是一组表达一个完整而独立思想的词。一个句子通常只能表达一个主要思想。当在一个句子中表达两个思想时，句子由两个子句构成，根据两个思想的关系，决定两个子句的关系，即遵循句法统一性原则。 Chapter Six: Sentence Writing Principles Ⅰ.The Unity of a Sentence（句子的统一性） 第三十六页，共六十五页。 平行原则 对等原则 Chapter Six: Sentence Writing Principles 隔离原则 主从原则 1. The Unity of a Sentence （句子的统一性） 第三十七页，共六十五页。 Mary has completed two math courses, but she must still take calculus（微积分）. Students may live in the dormitories or they may live in off-campus housing. 如果一个句子要表达两个同等重要的思想，通常由 两 个并列子句分别表达，并列子句之间相互独立，互 不隶属。 Chapter Six: Sentence Writing Principles 1. 对等原则 第三十八页，共六十五页。 George is a painter. Anyhow, I want to sleep no