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六年级作文之小学五年级作文 小学五年级作文myvillage 【篇一：小学五年级英语各单元作文(上册) 】 1. my english teacher miss tang is my english teacher. she’s very pretty. she is tall and thin. she has two big eyes and a small mouth. her hair is long. she likes cats very much. and she likes singing and dancing, too. her english is very good. we often play games in english classes. she is very kind to us. we all love her. 【要领点评】 这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师〞〃是一篇介绍人物的作文。小作 者开门见山〃直接点题〃首先介绍了英语老师的姓名〃然后逐一介 绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上课特点以及师生情感等。 小朋友们在写作文时〃要注意使用自己最熟悉的词[组] 〃以免写出 一些错句子。写作时要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写清 晰、标准等。 2. my days of the week i’m a student and i am in grade 5.i get up at six o’clock every day. i have breakfast at half past six, and go to school at seven o’clock. i have classes from monday to saturday. i have an english class on friday and i have a pe class on tuesday. i don’t have to go to school on school, and i like to go swimming on that day. 【要领点评】 这篇作文的题目是“我的一周〞〃小作者没有说一些空话〃而是从 自己的亲身经历写起〃表达了自己一周七天的所作所为〃并特别强 调了星期天的喜好〃写得自然、流畅。 小朋友们写作文时要注意人称及谓语动词的变化〃要依据提示〃结 合自己的实际〃写自己身边熟悉的事情。 3. my favourite food do you know what this is? guess! its colour is yellow. it’s long and thin. it looks like a small boat and crescent. oh, it is a banana. do you know what that is? guess again! its colour is orange. it’s round. it looks like a small ball and a small lantern. oh, it is an orange. i like then a lot. i like ice-creams. i like to chew gum. chocolates and candies are yummy. i like them ver much. how about you? what’s your favourite food? 【要领点评】 my favourite food 是一篇很成功的文章〃小作者并不是简单地列 举出自己最喜欢的每一种食物〃而是有详有略地进行介绍。整篇文章 用词准确、语言流畅、没有语法错误。另外〃文章中出现了一些生词〃 可见小作者是用心查字典了。 4. i can help do housework i am a girl. my name is li ling. i’m in class three, grade five. i’mhelpful at home. i can water the flowers, empty the trash and sweep the floor. after meals, i can help my mother do the dishes. on sunday, i can wash the clothes. what about you? are you he