续写大招-第四讲+环境描写+讲义+2023届高考英语专题复习.docxVIP

环境描写大招 环境描写，是续写重要描写手段之一，可以起到融情与景的效果，衬托人物的内心世界。适当的环境描写可以使文章读起来有真实感。 比较下面两种表达： I go to school happily. I together with Tom and Jerry set out early riding my bike, talking and singing all the way, with a red sun rising in the east and birds singing “Good morning” for us. 再如： I can well remember that there was a time when a deep blue sky, the song of the birds, moonlight and flowers could never have kept me spellbound. The wind was howling dreadfully and the rain was pouring heavily, whipping against the branches of lined tress，a strong feeling of horror creeping on me. 环境描写具体手段： 刘德华演唱《冰雨》： 冷冷的 冰雨 在我脸上 胡乱地 拍 形容词 意象 介短 副词 动词 The icy rain is whipping my face mercilessly. 方法一：形容词+意象+动词+副词/方位介短 1）The wind blew. 改写：The gentle warm wind blew softly on the face. 2）The trees waved. 改写：The tall green trees waved quietly on the roadsides. 3）The sun shone. 改写：The morning sun shone on the ground warmly and gently. The warm morning sunlight fell on the ground mildly. 续写过程中，可将三个（多个）意象结合起来，综合表达。 That night wind howled ruthlessly. 夜风无情地呼啸着。 Some unknown creatures murmured in the dark. 一些不知名的生物在黑暗中喃喃自语。 The moonlight shone weakly on the ground. 月光微弱地照在地上。 合并：The night wind howled ruthlessly, nameless creatures murmured in the dark and the moonlight shone weakly on the ground. 排比句：意象1+动词1，意象2+动词2，and 意象3+动词3. 示例： stream溪流: The afternoon sunlight fell on the grass, the wind blew lightly, and the water flew silently down the stream. fire(flame)火灾: Hot air enveloped the room, the lights glowed in the smoke, and flames spread wildly in all directions. beach海边: The mild sunlight fell on the sand, the air blew softly from the sea, and the crowds played happily on the beach. lake湖边: The thin clouds flew slowly in the sky, the tall green trees waved wildly in the wind, and the sunlight shone on the lake. classroom: Lights shone brightly on the floor, tidy desks and chairs lined up neatly, and the students listened to the teacher attentively. playground: Blazing sunlight burned