北京中考英语材料作文写作指导.docx

材料作文 一、“没有目标而生活，恰如没有罗盘而航行。” 某英文网站正在开展“目标指引我前行”为主题的征文活动，假如你是李华，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你的目标是什么，你打算怎样做来实现你的目标。 提示词语：goal, want to be, study hard, overcome, try one’s best, give up, achieve 提示问题： ●What is your goal? ●What are you going to do to achieve your goal???????? Living without a goal is like sailing(航行) without a compass. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 范文： Living without a goal is like sailing without a compass. So I have my life goal.?I want to be an excellent doctor in a big hospital. Because I want to help people to live healthier and longer. To achieve this goal, I will overcome all difficulties. I’m going to try my best to study hard and become the best student in our class. Then I’m going to go for a top medical university in China. I plan to read as many books as I can to get knowledge in my spare time. What’s more, I will exercise more to make me stronger and stronger. Ill never give up, I’m sure I can achieve my goal in the future. 解析： 1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以李华的身份，以“目标指引我前行”为主题，写一篇英语短文为某英文网站投稿，具体内容包括：你的人生目标是什么？你计划如何做来实现你的目标？注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。 2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称来展开写作，时态主要用一般现在时和一般将来时。写作时要认真审题，根据提示的内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作；可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。 二、互助是一种美德。它有助于我们互相学习，共