高中英语教学课件：《沙滩幽灵》读后续写.pptx

Continuation Writing What aspects should we consider when we give scores? Logical plots Coherence(衔接) Correct tense voice Language5. Clear handwritingWhat aspects should we consider when we give scores?proper words expressions sentence patterns Logical plots:What happened?The 6 elements of narrative writings?What would happen?Get the main plotInfer the development Underlined words 2 given sentences 01 Get the main plot On the beachIn the housea perfect holidayrelaxedhappycuriousa run-down housea long way offcautiousscared?Tip 1: clarify the plot with an outline. 02Infer the development Par.1Para.2Paragraph 1: “Let’s get out of here, Paula.” screamed Krin.Paragraph 2:Out they ran, all the way back to those wonderful umbrellas, beach chairs and crowds.Would they tell their parents the experience?What were their parents reaction?How did they feel?What did they learn from this experience?Where could they run out of the house?How did they manage to run out?How did they feel?in the houseon the beachTip 2: Predict the plot from questions. 1.哥哥鼓起勇气带妹妹逃出；妹妹讲述经过，感激哥哥2.兄妹撞开门逃出；妹妹讲述经过，父母解释房屋恐怖原因3.兄妹跳窗逃出；未告知父母经过，认为这次经历很有趣/恐怖4.陌生人出现，吓得兄妹逃出；告知父母，得知是流浪汉5.陌生人出现，好好招待兄妹；告知父母，决定要帮助他/她6.兄妹努力逃出；拥抱父母；忽然醒来，原来是一个梦Main plots from you:?? Language --- sentence patterns --- words and expressions He grasped her hand, only to find freezing fingers, sweating and trembling.She grasped Krin’s hands and burst into tears.Fortunately, the door was opened and they dashed out. 03Express clearly and vividly On the beachIn the housea perfect holidayrelaxedhappycuriousa run-down housea long way offcautiousscaredBeginningDevelopment Climax?on the beachFeelings?03Polish the language frightenedrelieved frightened:1.Mac’s panic rose // felt shivery at…2.A huge fear flowed through his body.3.She felt so scared that she felt her throat tightened.4.Their heart beat wildly, with their legs trembling. relieved：Once Mac saw his friends, he felt relieved with spark in his eyessigh i