高中英语课件：读后续写之情节设计.pptx

ContinuationWriting读后续写—FocusondesigningtheplotsWarmingup《错位》一个姑娘上了高铁，见自己的座位上坐着一男士。她核对自己的票，客气地说：“先生，您坐错位置了吧？”男士拿出票，大声嚷嚷：“看清楚点，这是我的座位，你瞎了眼吗？！”女孩仔细看了他的票，不再做声，默默地站在他的身旁。一会儿火车开动了，女孩低头轻轻地对男士说:“先生，您没坐错位，但您坐错了车！”有一种忍让，叫做让你后悔都来不及，如果嚎叫能解决问题，驴早就统治了世界。context（上下文）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。OldManDonovanwasameanmanwhohatedchildren.Hethrewrocksatthemandevenshotatthemwithashotgun.Atleastthat’swhatwehadheard.Hissmallfarmborderedourneighborhoodwheremyyoungersister,LeighAnn,andIlivedwhenweweregrowingup.Hisfarmwaslong,narrow,andquaint.Itheldtwotreasures.Onewashisbeautifulfruit.Thereweremanyvarietiesoffruit:pears,apples,andlotsmoreIjustcantthinkof.Thefruitnaturallydrewthechildrentohisland.Itmadethemintothieves.ButmysisterandIdidntdaretotakehisfruitbecauseofthehorriblerumorswehadheardaboutOldManDonovan.Onesummerday,wewereplayinginanearbyfield.Itwastimetoheadbackhome.MysisterandIwerefeelingverydaringthatday.TherewasashortcuttoourhousethatwentthroughtheDonovanfarm.Wethoughthewouldntbeabletoseeusrunacrosshispropertyaroundthelusciousfruittrees.Wewerealmostthroughthefarmwhenweheard,Hey,girl!inagruff,lowvoice.Westoppeddeadinourtracks!Therewewere,facetofacewithOldManDonovan.Ourkneeswereshaking.Wehadvisionsofrockspoundingourbodiesandbulletspiercingourhearts.Comehere,hesaid,reachinguptooneofhisappletrees.Stillshaking,wewentovertohim.Heheldoutseveralripe,juicy,redapples.Takethesehome,”hecommanded.Wetooktheappleswithsurprisedheartsandranallthewayhome.Ofcourse,LeighAnnandIatetheapples.Astimewenton,weoftenwentthroughOldManDonovansfarm,andhekeptongivingusmorelusciousfruit.Oneday,westoppedbytoseehimwhenhewasonhisfrontporch.Wetalkedtohimforhours.Whilehewastalking,werea