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第三步四句话,建框架借助四句话,建构续写框架,明确续写方向。位置与功能内容Para.1第二句承上启下“Don’tpanic!”hehandedeachoneawettowel,helpingthemcleanthemessquickly.段尾句Everythingsettled,Fatherleftthekitchen,promisingtokeeptheirsecret.Para.2第二句Meetingtheirsmilingeyes,Motherfeltconfuseduntiltheypresentedthebreakfastandsaid,“HappyMother’sDay!”段尾句回扣主题WhatabigsurpriseonMother’sDay!第四步活表达,定语言原文使用了定语从句、感叹句、非谓语动词、名词性从句、状语从句、并列复合句等高级表达手段,在续写部分要灵活沿用这些手法为自己的写作增光添彩。第五步巧衔接,保流畅在叙述事情的发展时可采用时间状语从句、非谓语动词、副词等形式进行连接,以使行文流畅自然。【满分作文】Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.“Don’tpanic!”hehandedeachoneawettowel,helpingthemcleanthemessquickly.Afterthat,Jeffstammeredouttheirplan,withhisfaceflushing.However,Fatherlaughed,“Soundsgreat!Let’sdoittogether!”Hearingthis,JennaandJeffalmostjumpedtotheirfeet,joyineyes.Underhiscarefulguidance,itdidn’ttakelongbeforetheFrenchtoastandchickenporridgewereready.Everythingsettled,Fatherleftthekitchen,promisingtokeeptheirsecret.Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.Meetingtheirsmilingeyes,Motherfeltconfuseduntiltheypresentedthebreakfastandsaid,“HappyMother’sDay!”Mothergavethematighthug,saying,“Unbelievable!Youcancook!It’sthebiggestsurprisethatIhavereceived.”Herfacelitupwithhappiness.“Theyhaveknownhowtotakecareofothers,”Fathersaidinresponsetoherexcitement,winkingatJennaandJeff.Theycouldn’thelpgiggling.WhatabigsurpriseonMother’sDay!跟踪训练(2022新高考全国Ⅰ卷)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Itwasthedayofthebigcross-countryrun.Studentsfromsevendifferentprimaryschoolsinandaroundthesmalltownwerewarmingupandwalkingtheroute(路线)throughthethickevergreenforest.IlookedaroundandfinallyspottedDavid,whowasstandingbyhimselfofftothesidebyafence.Hewassmallforten-year-olds.Hisusualbigtoothysmilewasabsenttoday.Iwal